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kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

0 posted 2001-02-03 12:46 PM

Write Me a Poem

Write me a sonnet, a word melody.
Pen it in blank verse, or it might be free,
Tanka or ballad.  I really don't care.
Compose a poem and be sure that you share.

Make it a cinquain or sweet villanelle.
Teach me a new form.  You do it so well!
Tell me of love or a story absurd,
Fancy or sorrow.  I'll hang on each word.

Show me your heart in the things that you write.
Warm me with poetry on this cold night.
Help me to laugh or remember a pain.
Paint me a scene, and then do it again.

Choose each word thoughtfully.  It is your art.
Read all your passions straight into my heart.
Know I'm delighted when your words I see.
Write a new poem and then post it for me!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2001-02-03 01:20 AM

wow! 1000 already!!?? CONGRATS!!

perhaps you will have to teach ME some of these poetry forms..lol i'm so clueless on what all those names mean...but great write--great 1000 marker!

hugs, g

"i know its kinda late
i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
jcroce

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2001-02-03 02:07 AM

Congratulations
One thousand you grace us with
Now one thousand more

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-02-03 02:11 AM

Hey, this was great! Happy 1000th! Enjoyed this read much and will try to do so!

jwesley

And DG, thought I was the only one alive that didn't know what all those strange (names, you say??) words meant!

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2001-02-03 04:23 AM

You are a dear friend
and so I am blessed.
your heart is loving,
giving and true.
so I write you this poem,
my style free verse.
You are so versatile,
your poems so varied.
A true poet you are
and gifted in verse.
but the best gift of all,
is your kindness and love.

Congratulations, Marilyn! I honored your request and wrote you a poem, just to say "thank you" for being "you"! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-02-03 04:48 AM

Congratulations with your 1000th.....and you celebrate it with such a delighted poem...what a way to present your milestone......love these fabulous write.

((hugs))
Charisma

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-02-03 06:53 AM

Congratulations on your 1000th! Seems like only yesterday you entered within the blue walls, and have been writing up a storm since! Well done!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2001-02-03 09:03 AM

LOL @ jwesley..."names" of poetry...

maybe we can have quick little workshop with MAR on these puppies..!

how 'bout it mar??

hugs, g

"i know its kinda late
i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
jcroce

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

8 posted 2001-02-03 10:54 AM

Gale -

You are too funny! Yes, 1000 comes fast, as you should know for yourself. Thanks for the congrats and the compliment.

Paula - Thank you. I feel I have been the receiver here.

jwesley - Thank you. I will look forward to reading.

Ellie - I am overcome. Thank you for writing for me. I treasure your friendship, as well. hugs

Charisma - Thank you for the congrats and the hug, which is returned in kind. ((hugs))

Sunshine - Thank you. It doesn't seem long, but there is so much inspiration here, and so many things to learn and try!

(And so many cool new smilies!)

Gale - Workshop? Me? LOL I think you want Nan for that. To tell you the truth, I'm still learning, and haven't even tried all of these, but didn't know they existed before I came to Passions. It's a great place, eh? We sure do have to thank that guy who brought us here.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-02-03 04:49 PM

wonderful "poem of poetry" to mark your milestone with.
very creative writing ... made for a most enjoyable read.
Congratulations on your 1000th post..
take care
jm

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-02-03 05:49 PM

Well, look at you! Congratulations!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2001-02-03 05:49 PM

CONGRATULATIONS kcsgrandma...loved it..HUGSS

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

12 posted 2001-02-03 11:53 PM

Janet Marie - Thank you. It is an honor to be read by you.

Kathleen -

Thanks. Nice to see your name here.

Victoria - Awww! HUGS to you!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-02-04 11:59 AM

KCS~
Wonderfully done !
Sorry I missed this one.
But ... sleuthing around on page 5
found it and now
bringing it alive !
Congratulations, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2001-02-04 12:05 PM

Oh Marilyn, this is beauteous! We will write for you - and you for us. What a lovely family this is!
Lary

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-02-04 01:40 PM

Congratulations on your 1000th post. Wonderful way to mark the occasion. Here's to many more!!!

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

16 posted 2001-02-04 03:34 PM

kcsgrandma,
CONGRATULATIONS on the 1000th post. It does seem like yesterday you were a newbie, but you have style and grace and fit in with these blue pages very well.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

17 posted 2001-02-05 12:39 PM

Marge - Thank you, both for the kind words and the resurrection.

Your comments are always a pleasure to read.

Lary - Thank you. I really like that "beauteous".

I am looking forward to many more poems from you.

Lone Wolf - With so many generous and talented poets here, who could want to leave? Thanks.

Kethry - Bless you for the "style and grace". I shall try to live up to that. Thank you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

18 posted 2001-02-06 12:39 PM

Kcs, loved this, so clever and witty, congrats!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

19 posted 2001-02-06 12:44 PM

please write me a poem
this is what you asked of me
and so, here it is

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

BSC

Moderator

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

20 posted 2001-02-06 03:39 PM

Oh wow ~ Just beautiful KC ~ Wonderful write for your 1000th....Congratulations!!!!! Bonnie

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

21 posted 2001-02-07 01:03 AM

Rosebud - Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Sven -           Words cannot express
                My thanks for your compliance
                      With humble request.
Thank you anyway

Bonnie - Thank you for all your kind replies.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

[This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 02-07-2001).]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

22 posted 2001-02-16 04:40 AM

hi

i will love to try to come up with a poem for you....you just name your preference and i will set my muse to work

belated congrats

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

23 posted 2001-02-16 05:57 AM

CONGRATS! on your 1000th! and what a wonderful write it is!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

24 posted 2001-02-16 10:37 AM

Congratulations!! This is really great.........that's why I find a way in here, as often as I can!

-SEA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

25 posted 2001-02-16 11:28 AM

I may not be a Grandma
nor a mother dear
but I can give the best of me
to children everywhere
For I have taught all ages
and love them, everyone
for children are our future
when our day is over, done.

*well this is my best at the moment for you..when really I write all of mine for you and everyone else to read..huggz and congratulations

~Wynter/Moonchild/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

26 posted 2001-02-16 11:47 AM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

27 posted 2001-02-16 04:01 PM

This is wonderful! *S* I enjoyed it very much and look forward to you following your own instructions. *S* Congrats!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

28 posted 2001-02-16 04:26 PM

Kcsgrandma,

You are a wonderful poet and a great asset to this poetry group!

Corinne

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

29 posted 2001-02-16 04:34 PM

Love it. Congrats on 1000!!

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

30 posted 2001-02-17 01:02 AM

kaile - It was a big surprise to see this bumped up, and an even nicer surprise to see who did it! Nice to see you again, my friend. Thank you. I'm still looking for that sonnet.

ethome - Thank you, neighbor.

It's an honor to hear from a wonderful writer.

SEA - Thanks. Yes, this site is a veritable feast of poetry, a great place to be filled.

Wynter - Thank you for the poetic response.

hugs to you, just for being you

Kathleen - THANK YOU!!!

Nice to see you here.

suthern -

Follow my own instructions? I was just looking for the pleasure of reading all your wonderful work! Thanks.

Corinne - What a very sweet thing to say! Thank you.

Poeminster - Thank you, kind poet.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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