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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2001-02-03 12:29 PM


A vivacious daydreamer,
Eyes effulgent with life
And a savage, tumultuous fire...
Born from summer’s verdant arms,
Lifted from twilight’s fervor,
And transcending all barriers,
A woman’s quiet form
Emerges to harness the sky.  

Hands tattered by the marks of time
Are thrown up to the clouds,
Capturing each twinkle of power
Fluttering upward
From the breathing earth.  

Sepulchral vocals throb incantations,
The words spinning in the air
As energy weaves through her fingers,
Only smashing to the ground
When her confident command bids it.

Her prayer of peace is delicately whispered
In fluid, ancient tongue
As she pitches her magic forward
And watches it softly disperse
Within the electrically charged air...
And then she walks away,
Knowing now that the power for change
Rests in the tender hands
Of we who believe it can happen.


*Inspired by recent headlines, some of my own daydreams, and the knowledge that has always been in my heart- we have the power to change our world, to make the bad things good, to care for each other, encourage one another, and to, above all else, love with every fiber of our beings*




*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 02-03-2001).]

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Acies
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1 posted 2001-02-03 12:37 PM


wonderful poetry here Krista
I haven't really read a lot of your pieces
but I'll tell you right now that I'm in awe
you have written down such beautiful words

"Knowing now that the power for change
Rests in the tender hands
Of we who believe it can happen."

very true, very true


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



jwesley
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2 posted 2001-02-03 02:21 AM


Really enjoyed the read and loved the images invoked.

easy, my friend...

jwesley

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-02-03 03:29 AM


If everyone used their energy for doing good instead of either just existing or trying to tear things down, the world would be a better place for sure. And our world HERE is better because YOU post your lovely poetry here.  
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4 posted 2001-02-03 07:51 AM


Her prayer of peace is delicately whispered
In fluid, ancient tongue
As she pitches her magic forward
And watches it softly disperse
Within the electrically charged air...
And then she walks away,
Knowing now that the power for change
Rests in the tender hands
Of we who believe it can happen.
======================

K, (first of all) how wonderful to see your name here and your amazing poetry ...
also I dont know what is more awe inspiring ..
this poem of brillance or the footnote that accompanies it ...
both showcase your grace and beauty ...
both relect your light ...and you shine in every word.
Hold on to that energy and that innocence ..
let it be your guiding force ...grow in your own light.
You and your gifts are a beautiful thing to witness.    


Trying To Find Purpose
Vertical Horizon

Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind

Chorus:
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind
The wind and your love to carry me

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But I know in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
In jealousy


Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind

To carry me
Please carry me


If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~





[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 02-03-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-02-03 11:11 AM


"Knowing now that the power for change
Rests in the tender hands
Of we who believe it can happen"

Krista, this piece truely inspired me. Thank you for reaching out and touching us all with your beautiful poetry! Keep up the great work.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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6 posted 2001-02-03 11:53 AM


Excellent writing, Krista! Beautifully expressed!
snowpants
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7 posted 2001-02-03 02:33 PM


'And then she walks away,
Knowing now that the power for change
Rests in the tender hands
Of we who believe it can happen.'

Beautiful poem...I love the images!

sp  


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Alwye
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In the space between moments
8 posted 2001-02-04 12:48 PM


acire- Thanks for reading, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  

jwesley- Thank you very much.  

Ms. deVine- Your words are indeed true, and thank you for the awesome compliments, it means a lot to me.  

JM- Oh my...you are truly a gem, you know that?  Thank you so much for reading and for putting in the time to give me such a wonderful reply.  I am touched.

Erica- Thank you for reading my friend, I am truly glad that it inspired you.

Denise- Thank you!  

Snowpants- Thank you also!


*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

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9 posted 2001-02-04 12:57 PM


A wonderful poem with such an important message... Truly inspiring and beautiful ideals you have expressed. Great work, sweetheart

Abrahm Simons

"It doesn't matter if we turn to dust
Turn and turn and turn we must
I guess I'll see you dancing in the ruins" - Blue Oyster Cult

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10 posted 2001-02-04 07:48 PM


Krista~
A refulgent glow emanates from your talent.
Beautifully portrayed.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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