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Of Starlit Skies |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Of Starlit Skies~*Marge Tindal*~ Where setting sun meets the end of day evening draws a curtain of splendor across the sky thoughts cascade with remembering starlit nights of sighs touching ~ quelling ~ touching recalling moments of splendor kissing ~ melting ~ kissing then doing it again better ~ longer ~ stronger our love has grown starlit skies holding the promise of now touching ~ quelling ~ kissing ~ melting better ~ longer ~ stronger our love still grows shared under the splendor of starlit skies~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very lovely, ms. marge.... i like it when it gets "better ~ longer ~ stronger" ROFL where you been? enjoyed this one, sparkling poet.... you're shining!  you are a star! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
she has obviously been under a starlit sky somewhere! This is a beauty and yep, I gotta agree with doreen on favorite line! Hugs and love... |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Well now, if I could be having all that fun under starlit skies, I sure wouldn't be here!  Very very nice, Marge.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, obviously been under lots of stars, my friend...loved the images. jwesley |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I liked reading your poem "Where setting sun meets the end of day evening draws a curtain of splendor across the sky" beautiful, thanks AP |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Margie girl, this is a fabulous piece from you. It's the stars you know how I love stars. And your writing too of course. Love this one and now I'll post another reply under the real me Because we don't want Beverley getting ideas do we (above her station dear heart) Take care love Mushy And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is utterly truly wonderful. Yes it is splendid and I did say I love it didn't I Thank you for this treat love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one shines, Marge! Lovely! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful description of the wonderful things that can grow under a starlit sky. Thanks for sharing.  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge.....these fabulous sparkle write is very lovely as always excellent.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A definate keeper... enjoyed muchly... |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Marge, I enjoyed reading this. I found it very romantic...it made me long for a long night of romance. Thanks, David2 |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sparkling poem! Twinkling with magic! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so beautiful in its devotion and promise... wonderful writing sweet poet... so romantic and sweet ... we have missed you here of late ... (yes were always watching) love and hugs margie-girl |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sweet and lovely. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh how sweet this is Marge... Lovely thoughts and yeah I just adore those starry skies Hugs2UPoetFriend ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge-- Soft and sweetly penned. Love it. Poeminister Aloft into the day's advance/ o'er deepest grass of green aloft we now, toward this dance/ of currents unforseen --Claire Brown Bower |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
hhhhmmmmmmmmm.......has our little Margie been out star gazing? What a beautiful and serene write from you. Love the way it sort of lets the mind wander into picturing a vision of our own to go along with the words. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, a many splendoured thing is this. I think it is splendiferous! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh WOW, WOW, WOW....Marge....such a lovely heart penned here....most beautiful my friend....be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ This thanks is a long-time coming ... *Hugs* Serenity~ LOL ... right ! KCS~ Me ??? I'd probably still be here ... JWesley~ *smiles* here AgustP~ Thanks ! Beverley~ LOL !  Marsha~ LOL ... have you seen our Bev de Bump lately ?? I think she's missed by more than just me ! Denise~ Thank you, hon. LoveBug~ Appreciate you, my friend. Charisma~ You're wonderful ! ! Mike~ *Keeper-Hugs* to you ! David2~ Yes ! Me too ! Insect~ *smiles* JanetMarie~ You know I'm grinning ! VAS~ Thank you. Dani~ Glad you enjoyed it, my sweet friend. PoeMinister~ Thank you. MarkB~ *Kisses*  Kethry~ So very pleased you enjoyed it so. GreenEyes~ Always very glad to know you've read and enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Red |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
its really LOVELY i enjoyed it..it is soo ROMANTIC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Shared under the splendor of starlit skies" that's such a wonderful catalyst for such a beautiful poem....excellent Marge!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
What a beautiful night. Where can I book?  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Red~ Thanks for the 'beautiful' ... I like sharing. DreamLess~ Welcome to Passions ! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it. ETHome~ Your replies always give me a smile of satisfaction. Thank you. Dee~ Thanks, doll ! Bookings begin in the heart ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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