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Jill
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 62
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-02-02 09:54 PM


Whenever I need you
You're always there
The way that you love me
Is ever so rare

Red roses you bring me
Take my breath away
Intimate moments
At the end of the day

Your soft touch sends shivers
Your caresses so light
The afterglow of our loving
Shines on through the night

Don't doubt that I love you
For one thing is true
A lifetime of everything
        I.O.U.



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-02-02 11:19 PM


love this jill..*s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
2 posted 2001-02-03 09:17 AM


'Red roses you bring me
Take my breath away
Intimate moments
At the end of the day

Your soft touch sends shivers
Your caresses so light
The afterglow of our loving
Shines on through the night'

Wonderful picture you've given us here!  I love this!

sp  


'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing...

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2001-02-03 10:54 AM


Beautiful words of love.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-02-03 05:41 PM


This is such a sincere, honest expression of just plain ole love and I loved it!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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