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A Promise
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A Promise |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Promise shadows roll in lumbering along, strong low, blue-gray movement almost unrelenting in the feel of the surreal soundless, soundless no wind to move them on, but they come, they come on strong will they carry me along? so lift me, lift me higher, higher still and in the fulfill of this need take heed as I take flight for with you, with you to give me height to give me might to shine again I will win to dispel the shadows of the night dispel the spell lift the veil so set the sun to sail and sail on high I shall O, I shall… now come, grasp the beam and let it stream through your soul common goals common goals and we shall run the spectrum of what's to come and in what's right this rainbow delight as the lumbering shadows roll to take over the land as their goal to take over in shadows blue-gray we shall overtake the day and alight the lights with rainbow delights for you've lifted the veil and I've set the sail and we shall prevail for on this beam you've set your dream and all shall be as it seems in this, given lovingly thank you for loving me 02.02.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful, just peaceful and romantic, with that amazing style you have. I love reading your poems.  Sandra |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
a great poem, silent and beautiful, AP |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"alight the lights with rainbow delights" Love the rhythm and the anticipation within this piece. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all....this one likes me....I am so very glad you liked it too... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, your romantic poetry is sooooo smooth...these are beautiful words, indeed.. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, only a romantic like you would see that....thank you kindly.... |
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