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Precious Love

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Charisma
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0 posted 02-02-2001 04:17 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma


Precious Love

Into your eyes, I start my journey
To discover carefully
How golden circles enfold your iris
Shows a lovely golden bliss

While I drown inside your eyes
Merge within heavenly sighs
As I peel levels of your soul
To bare your delighted whole

How your magic enfold me tight
Within your eyes I'm losing height
Tender feelings floating above
Entwine our souls with precious love.


Charisma




[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-03-2001).]
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like it
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Oh, my friend, this is a precious one, full of warm feelings........I love it!! I'm on the lookout for your name always here!!

~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~
it's later than you think!



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Beautiful!

I love these lines:

"While I drown inside your eyes
merge within heavenly sighs
as I peel levels of your soul"

Wow!

Take care,
Melissa
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4 posted 02-02-2001 11:09 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

charisma~
some powerful stuff you got here
girlie! excellent writing as always
from you. full of heart, full of soul.
take care
amy :


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

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lovely charisma..HUGS..enjoyed...

                                ~V~


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enjoyed the read my friend, as usual.


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Loved it.  

" I have seen without perceiving
I have been another man
Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold,
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8 posted 02-03-2001 09:17 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

very sweet CHARISMA!!  dreamily romantic...

hugs, g


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i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
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                                            How your magic enfold me tight
                                           Within your eyes I'm losing height

This lovely, Charisma.  I love these lines, love to think of getting lost in the depths.  Very nice writing.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn
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10 posted 02-03-2001 02:15 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Vandana: thank you my friend, glad that you like it

Sunnyone: great to know that you love it, and I am honoured to know that you are looking out for me.....as I know how a great poet you are....I enjoy your words of art very much too.

Melissa: I am happy to know that you loved these lines...thank you for the *wow*  

aimy: well thank you for your lovely compliment and for the excellent, appreciate it very much as I know what a talented writer you are.

Victoria: thank you for the *hugs*.....always love those friendly hugs....and I'm so glad that you enjoyed the read.

jwesley: thank you my friend, I'm glad that you enjoyed it

EagleOne: thank you for reading and I am glad that you love it.

dg: well I am a dreamy romanticus.....maybe to much a dreamer,  but well its nice to be a dreamer as life can be so cruel sometimes.

kcsgrandma: oh yeah.....to lost your self in depth of eyes.....is a marvelous feeling..thank you for your lovely comment.
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Charisma~
Such lovely writing, as I've come to admire from you.
What a welcome you are to these forums.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 02-04-2001 02:54 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Thank you Marge, for your kind reply....and I am very honoured that you like my humble writings, as I know thay you are one of the greatest poets inhere, so my dear friend, I am the one from admire you....

Charisma
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Charisma,  the expression in this is so vivid....I loved the wordplay!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis


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Great piece, Charisma...I especially loved these lines:
                                                                                             as I peel levels of your soul,
                                                                                             to bare your delighted whole.
Exquisite poetry here.


Nathan
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A very exquistie and lovely poem, Charism. I always know it will be delightful, before I even read.... I watch for your poems as much as i can aloha, my friend

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


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Kathleen: thank you, glad that you loved the wordplay....

Nate dog: thank you for your kind comment

KoKo: thank you, and I appreciate your comments very ver much....and I am honoured that you like my simple writes..... thank you my friend

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(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always find precious love through loves eyes and feel warmth in your heart always! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Just because I'm missing you
and hoping to stir that English-writing muse of yours~

LOVE YOU my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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