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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-02 02:32 PM


Snow Not So White Part 2

So she lived somewhere, you don’t want the location
It’s hardly the type of place you’d take a vacation
Anyway these fairytale places are never in good spots
It’s the witches and wizards of which there are lots
There’s something extremely off putting about spells
I’m not certain what it is, perhaps it’s the odd smells
Anyway on with the plot, yes there is one, so don’t moan
I’m telling the story, okay it’s true, I’ve got it on loan

This isn’t the same story that you’ve all heard anyway
This is a different one, yes quite different I must say
It’s about when she was living in that house with those men
Huh dwarves! I don’t believe it now, and I didn’t then  
If there were seven of them can you imagine the scene?
I’d say it was a lively party; if you know what I mean  
Don’t tell me they were minding their mine all day
I think there was more too it no matter what you say

Anyway before all the business with witches and spells
When she was beguiling them with cooking smells
And she was supposedly making their home all neat
It’s a tale about how she made someone’s heart beat
There was a young woodsman who worked very hard
The usual story about lives that are crossed not starred
Anyway his mum a widow, why are they always alone
Why do so many have partners living in the dead zone?

Anyway this lad saw Snow and not knowing her name
He didn’t think chilly he thought of playing loves game
In short he fell for her hook line and sinker, big time
And being a shy lad, he didn’t understand Snows crime
I mean seven men, what kind of fairy story is all this
Certainly Snow,   and all you got was an innocent kiss!
This lads name was Jack, yes the same one with the beans
But this is before he traded the cow, at least so it seems


Marsha



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Only a memory of the same
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-02-02 03:05 PM


You write such stories!!  I didn't know you lived in England, I have a friend in Yorkshire....

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2001-02-02 04:18 PM


This was as much fun as the first one!  Love it and keep them coming!
         Hugs, ME

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-02-02 07:21 PM


Yes, Kathleen, she lives in England, and she has a friend named Puck....and when she's down and out, she's forever finding luck...then when luck has her up and by the chin, she snaps around and throws it out, but Puck remains her friend......

LOL...

On to THREE

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4 posted 2001-02-03 10:56 AM


Marsha couldn't find one but I love two you poetic stroyteller you.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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5 posted 2001-02-03 01:10 PM


Kathleen love, yes England where it's always either raining, or we have weather of some kind. And now you have a friend in Kent love.  
Thank you, this was all Kari's fault, I swear it wasn't me. I only want to do simple stuff. And the simpler the better.  
Thank you
Take care love as always
                     Mushy
                        
ME love thank you, did it make you smile?
If it did I thank you and if it didn't why didn't it?
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    
Kari love, as long as I have my friend Sunshine I shall be ever blessed. Even when you do crack the whip dear heart.  
And one day you are going to give me a challenge and I won't be able to do it. Not by the hair on my chinny chin chin.  
Not that I have any hair on my chin love but I was trying to stick with the fairy story theme
Thank you dear heart
Take care love as always
                Majestic Puckish Marsha
                            
did you say Puck or Duck? I know neither you said luck!!

Kethry love, thank you truly and you are too kind dear heart.
As long as it gave you a smile
Thank you love
Take care dear heart
                    love as always
                       Slushy
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-04-2001).]

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2001-02-04 04:10 AM


girl girl girl...SEVEN men? LOL I aint gonna say it...
Marsha
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7 posted 2001-02-04 06:47 AM


Paula dear heart, I used to be nicknames Snow White, but I drifted  
I wasn't, she was a crafty minx, I swear she was. (And we are supposed to believe this fairy story that she stayed in a cottage, which already had seven men in it, and nothing happened) Mmmmm certainly Ms Snow, I don't care if they were diminutive or no, 7 men? Oh she must think we are sooooo gullible. Even I don't believe it, and I'll believe anything
Thank you love
Take care love as always
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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8 posted 2001-02-04 02:17 PM


Bubbles. . . you're making me laugh hysterically here. . . LOL. . .

If you keep this up. . . I shall never make it to part three!!!  

what a story!!!!

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Marsha
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9 posted 2001-02-05 11:29 AM


Sven dear heart, who me? What I'm innocent 'onest gu'nor. I wasn't there, it wasn't my shift, and I had a day off. That's all my standard excuses love. You like, I always think a laugh is so much easier to give don't you?
I know you do. Thank you love, I'm glad it made you grin a bit
Take care love as always
                 Bubbles
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-02-07 12:14 PM


just who would want to live with SEVEN men!!!  jeez!!  one is messy enough!  

on to part 3...

hugs, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
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