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Iwritethepoems
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 25


0 posted 2001-02-02 01:45 PM


Take my hands, hold them tightly,
your fingers through each of mine,
loop them,  and lead me
take me, guide me, teach me, move me,
open me, cover me, lie with me!


Turn my arms into your own-
weave me, pull me, encircle me,
envelope me, seal me, taste me,
need me…….rest in me, cradle me
tease me – play with me!


Make your chest my haven
wipe the beads of sweat from me
breathe for me, inhale
every pore of me,
define our ecstasy
outline my modesty
swift falls the fantasy-
resonate the thrill of me

loving you……………..


[This message has been edited by Iwritethepoems (edited 02-02-2001).]

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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
1 posted 2001-02-02 02:42 PM


Very interesting, it has a certain kind of fast paced flair that I like.  Great work.
Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

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