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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-02-02 11:54 AM


If love were a credit limit,
I'd be over my limit,
I love you so much,
That sometimes It's hard to show,
Just how much my love for you has grown,
Over the years, so many ways, We have grown
Attached until sometimes, I wonder if we
know just how much we really do know,
How much we love each other,
If all of the sudden that love were to stop,
Would we realize then what we have,
Is something that needs to be cherished,
Received and Both given,
If love were a treasure would it glimmer
As gold so I could wear it proudly,
For my darling don't you see,
I want the world to see that though love,
Sometimes is not shown as oft as it should,
What it all comes down to is I love you.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
1 posted 2001-02-02 06:11 PM


'For my darling don't you see,
I want the world to see that though love,
Sometimes is not shown as oft as it should,
What it all comes down to is I love you.'

Beautiful write, Rosebud!  Love it!

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'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing...

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-02-03 02:52 PM


Sometimes we need to tell the world just to show each other that not only do we love them but were proud for all to know it.
Someone is very lucky to have you!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-02-03 05:29 PM


Wonderful words...and I believe we always need to remember to cherish and appreciate love...James
Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
4 posted 2001-02-03 06:13 PM


snowpants, inot2be, and James, I do find this is so true in many people, sometimes we don't cherish each other as much, but deep down believe me it's there.
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