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Miss Abagail Mannering
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byron, il

0 posted 2001-02-02 11:25 AM


Written June 1st 2000

Leave a rose on my pillow,
place a note beside the phone.
Race ahead to the willow,
to the blanket- wait alone.

I see the rose and test it's scent.
I read the note with a smile.
I follow the trail where you went,
knowin' we'll be there awhile.

You kiss my lips and closely snuggle...
Lay me back with a gentle shove.
You bend your head, my neck you nuzzle...
as we get lost inside our love.

(written during a Psych class...missin' my honey. i know i didn't spell reandevoux right..sorry.)

"Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

© Copyright 2001 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
Wesley the Blue
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1 posted 2001-02-02 11:31 AM


Wondeful and heartfelt words.  I could picture eveything in my mind.  great work.
Keith

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laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2001-02-02 12:12 PM


Such a delicious daydream! Evokes a wishful fantasy, yet remains in realistic bounds.
Nicely done!
Lary

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3 posted 2001-02-02 05:07 PM


I'll bet everyone was wondering why you were smiling so much during class! LOL. This is great!
Miss Abagail Mannering
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4 posted 2001-02-06 10:42 AM


*blushes* well, i did get asked why i was smilin' so much..lol...but ya know... i worte some of my best poetry in psych class! coinkydink? i think not!

"Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

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