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Open Poetry #12

A Sea we traveled

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2001-02-02 05:48 AM

Water cold
and hard
and sunk

Floats upon a sea
we see and shun

Travel slowly 'pon
the place
where all but pain
did find a face

Time to sway
gentle breeze
Pass away
into screams

The night
sweet breath
did wake
and all the
nightmare sea

The racing heart
a beat apart
a time, a farce
and seen

Heart to place
another brace
shining lonely
with glee

I walked
upon the beach
a lone here
with thee

Water, water, every where,
And all the boards did shrink;
Water, water, every where,
Nor any drop to drink.

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
T

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-02-02 07:55 AM

Walter,
I could feel the sea in this write.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-03-15 07:18 PM

walter? ya made me feel balmy with this piece of poetic perfection. You write beautifully!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2001-03-15 08:48 PM

This is the first I read of you, I loved it, I hope to here more.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-03-15 09:25 PM

Sir...a fine read...and good to read you again....

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