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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-02-02 01:34 AM

If somehow I should stop,
Say your name out loud,
How would I explain,
The reason for this slip,
Would it be the way you loved me,
The way you seen right through me?
The way you knew my every thought,
And for all of me you sought,
Oh my darling of remiss,
How could I not think of you with
This bliss,
When you have shown me what it is
To love.
So should I explain the slip,
So nonchalantly from my lips,
Or just somehow casually,
Change the frame of mind.
Not as easy as it sounds,
But sometimes love isn't easy,
When it's over said and done.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

1 posted 2001-02-02 06:14 PM

enjoy the read

I like that word"if what"If only" "if somehow"

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-02-02 07:03 PM

It seems hard to forget those loves that we miss......and the names linger on our tongues, even when we don't want them to! Loved this one!!

~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~
it's later than you think!

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-02-02 09:46 PM

Been there.....done that. Glad though that he was understanding.

Great write!!!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-02-03 07:22 AM

Rosebud,
I can relate to this, I enjoyed this.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-02-03 06:22 PM

sometimes, it is very hard but easier as time passes, and I guess that's all you can do, not saying that I'm not happy, but I guess we all tend to reminisce at times.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-02-04 11:43 AM

RoseBud~
I like it when the tongue trips over the thoughts of the mind.
Enjoyed this read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-02-04 01:43 PM

Looking back can be a good thing at times. Nice writing.

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2001-02-06 11:54 PM

Thanks Marge and Lonewolf, sometimes that tongue is a two-edged sword! talking about tripping over, yikes..

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