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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-02-02 12:40 PM



If a simple smile,
Should form, don't hesitate,
Let it,
after all a smile is anything but,
simple, it's quite perplex,
Try it, there I told you,
Sometimes it's not easy standing on
your head is it?


[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 02-02-2001).]

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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-02-02 12:53 PM


And it worked . . .  
(ever try to squelch a smile?)

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2001-02-02 01:00 AM


nope please inform, me anything would help! hey maybe I just squelched one and didn't know it..!
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-02-02 01:05 AM


Haha, I had to chuckle at this. It was pure brilliance, blanketed with witful humor. Nice job!

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-02-02 11:10 PM


This reminds me of a song we used to teach in Sunday School:
"If you chance to meet a frown
Do not let it stay.
Quickly turn it upside down
And smile that frown away."

And it worked.  It made me smile.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-02-03 08:24 AM


Yeah, it did it, again. Good one.
Melton

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2001-02-03 09:26 AM


Cute! Very Cute!
I liked it a lot and it made me smile (without standing on my head)
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Rosebud1229
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North Carolina
7 posted 2001-02-03 06:16 PM


I'm glad I made you all smile, after all you know I've also gave you intellect in the process really after all smile is one of the longest words in the dictionary, besides smiles, and that's miles imagine that!
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