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Xander New Member
since 2001-02-01
Posts 3Wausau, WI |
She tried to scream Her voice would not come She tried to break free The bonds held strong She tried not to cry The tears streamed down her face She tried to hide the fear It echoed in her eyes She tried to escape My will was too strong I tried to break her Unlike her, I succeeded |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oooh...I think this one actually scares me. I enjoyed the comparison contrast here. Although it is difficult for me to see if there is any remorse...I think that's what frightened me. I know someone like this... One for thought here. Thank you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think this belongs in Dark Forum...my opinion. And it bothers me too....guess you meant it to do that right? I look forward to reading more of your work.  |
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