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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the snow f a l l s a January wind blows I'm standing outside watching it f a l l I reach for your hand it's not there but yet. . . . . . I felt it's warmth that's when I knew that I was in love with you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
This reminds me of something I did a while back . . . might have to dig it up. Colder than a witch's *** here tonight (and coming your way, Sven). This added a nice little bit of warmth. Thanks Kraw' |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice.......thats my fav saying......my hand in yours.....helen |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwww .... was THAT when you knew? i thought it was when.... *blush*... oh never mind, i'll send ya an email... hehe *wink* seriously, though, this is very e.e. in a cummings and going sorta way but don't read anything into that, it's just the guy's name, y'know? and he was really into lower case and really cool formatting, as are you, and i dig this one, sir... ... simple, sincere, and romantic...  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
ahhhhhhhh! *Sighs* Well Mr. Romance, I just loved this. Are you sure that you weren't Shakespeare in a past life Take care, Melissa~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I love the snow, and the company of a hand makes it all the better. Nice style... i loved it. -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kraw, glad that I could add a bit of warmth to your night. . . and thanks for the cold!! :sarcastic: helen, there's nothing like having a hand to hold. . . thank you. . . doreen, well. . . it was this time first. . . and it was that other time when. . . well, send me that e-mail!!! Thank you so much. . . yes, it is "cummingsesque" (Is that a word) in a way. . . he's always been my favorite. . . and I've adopted his style for a lot of my stuff. . . Melissa, I'm sure that I wasn't the Bard in a past life. . . although I can tell you that he was a great guy! Thank you. . . Jeremy, thank you. . . yes, another hand always makes it better. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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