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A Lullaby, By Request....
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A Lullaby, By Request.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Lullaby, by Request when it comes to loving one little one, I love you little one, I love you you have yet to begin I will help you through I will help you through fly with me…. climb this tree seek the stars and you'll… go far… when it comes to loving one little one, I love you little one, I love you you have yet to start your run I will help you through I will help you through and we'll fly climb those trees scratch our knees and we'll… go far… when it comes to loving one… little one… I love you… little one… I love you… 02.01.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
aw, this is so sweet...... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you promise?  this is lovely, karilea... i'd love to put this to music.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THIS? is so loving and sweet.... rock me to sleep, lovely poet! love to you, you ARE my sunshine, karilea! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I almost fell asleep because of its soothingness; not of its words. I can hear it singing in my room now  Thanks for the wonderful read.-Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Sweet indeed! Now where did I put that time machine . . . Can't I go back, paalleeezzze? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Karilea ~ This is just so precious. This should be the song in every mother's heart. And what a heart you have... Take care, Melissa |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I hope DP does set this to music - and I hope to see or hear it - it is truly a lovely lullaby |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
doreen, if you come back to read this....be my guest....you have carte blanche... everyone else...thank you so much! I didn't have much time to think back on what I use to make up for my kids....but give me time, and I might come up with another.... thank you... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So sweet, Sunshine... and so peaceful. (Now how am I supposed to stay awake and keep up my work pretense? LOL) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at suthern....I don't know, girl....beats me! But good luck! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
thanks for the "carte blanche"... but i'd really really like to put it to music.... may i? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doreen, this is your official "YES"....but I'll get someone to notarize it if you want....and if you would like to know what I think it sounds like...we'll talk.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
nothing like a homespun lullabye very sweet....so if you and doreen work out the music, how 'bout doing a parker-type recital piece of it aye?? love to hear the finished product hugs, g "i know its kinda late i hope i didnt wake you but theres somethin i just gotta say-- i knew you'd understand..." jcroce [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful and soft. Would love to hear it too. Poeminister |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers.......this one will work alright. Very peaceful indeed. Bet some babys will find some dreams in this one. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Beautiful and comforting. I can hear it now. Very nice. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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