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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Spend Me Come away with me -- marry your sight to my own, and let's be blind to the world. Let's take retribution upon the scorn of hapless emotion, scaling high atop the fog where daybreak and sunset flag our communion in crest of newly discovered colors -- the harmony of you and me. Let's tremble in the touch of lily tone skin -- moistly trailed in pearl like beads ascending through open pores. The creation of its burning -- tireless devotion found in the selfless rendering of tongue to fire. Spend me like wealth infinite in its accumulation -- the waves of my touch yours on demand. Wrap your heart in the cloak of our resolve, the warring parties made pitiful in their chiding. We are one song -- authored in the twine of our spirits command, the sounding of our voices spiraling in the circle of our life. Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh boy, I mean, my oh my, oh my goodness gracious, heaven's , my stars......did I love this or what!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm ready to go shopping............  "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let's tremble in the touch of lily tone skin -- moistly trailed in pearl like beads ascending through open pores. The creation of its burning -- tireless devotion found in the selfless rendering of tongue to fire. Spend me like wealth infinite in its accumulation -- the waves of my touch yours on demand. Wrap your heart in the cloak of our resolve, the warring parties made pitiful in their chiding. We are one song -- authored in the twine of our spirits command, the sounding of our voices spiraling in the circle of our life. ======================= very well written Robert... excellence of unique vocab choices and imagery very cool poem poet sir. If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
OMG OMG what a poem..............let's tremble in the touch.......powerful words there........helen |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
We are one song -- authored in the twine of our spirits command, the sounding of our voices spiraling in the circle of our life. goes right to my heart. always... ~eyn~ |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Kathleen - Thanks so much for your enthusiastic response! I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph Janet - Thank you! I appreciate your generous remarks concerning this piece. It was a pleasure sharing with you. Robert Joseph Helen - Thank you! I'm happy to know this piece moved you to comment so thoughtfully. Robert Joseph Neve, I'm thrilled to know I wrap your soul in love, each day! Thank you! Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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