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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
(Once again, my 'Inspiration' put this in my heart) Far beyond the sand...to the rising sun over the horizon; Your face shines in my eyes...the gentle ocean breeze whispers your name. Brings back to me each memory...forever engraved in my thoughts. Yellow and orange hues at the break of dawn...images of you dancing across my heart. I couldn’t possibly see clearer than I do in this reverie. Caught in just a moment’s time...my stare eternally entranced by your gaze... The quality of your heart shines through me And glistens in my eyes--of this i am certain. The serenity of this morning...seagulls soaring in the distance... I will lie here, Incessantly reminded of the steadfast spirit residing in you. The deep of the sea...the height of the heavens... None compare to the refuge I have found in you...the haven of rest You’ve bestowed upon me. Nothing is beyond your ability; You’ve entrusted me with your affection...I’ve hidden it here in me To cherish for all of my days. The ecstasy in your words blazes like the noonday sun... The clouds in your smile illustrate the elation you hold. The raging waves of the sea...the roaring thunder from the firmament... Nothing will harm me while I’m in your safe keeping. The cooling wind beneath the star-filled sky...the consoling pastel moon... Greater things await me...you have my heart. The night sky bids me adieu as you carry me home... To the resting place of our sanctity. -kh 02/01 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This brought so much of a sense of peace to me, thank you! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Kathleen! I am glad you liked this! sp  'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ WOW!!! This is absolutely perfect... written with your usual grace but you have definitely stepped up your writing. I am loving the effect your "inspiration" is having on you. I only wish that I could be around more to read your lovely work (and others). time seems to be limiting me these days  but this was truly beautiful! brought such a sense of peace and love to my heart. thanks for making my first smile on this lovely Friday loves ya aim ~~~~~~~~~~ 24/7 "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The serenity of this morning...seagulls soaring in the distance... I will lie here, Incessantly reminded of the steadfast spirit residing in you. The deep of the sea...the height of the heavens... None compare to the refuge I have found in you...the haven of rest You’ve bestowed upon me. ====================== I could have sworn I replied to this lastnight!!???? all the (...) must have made me giddy  very cool write SP and your really growing with the imagery in your poetry. beautiful images wrapped up in lovely sincere sentiments ... wonderful writing girlie If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Lovely visualizations - such heartfelt love and joy - just wonderful! Lary |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Aims: awww...perfect? well, if so, then you have my 'inspiration' to thank! and, as far as being around more to read my stuff, anyway, you won't get away that easily...remember, I know where you live...hehe...love ya, m'dear friend! thanks!!  JM: hehe...well, those (...) will definitely do that to ya if ya have enough of 'em  ...LOL...seems I'm usin' 'em in everyday conversation too...that's a sign of a problem..hehe.  Well, thank you so much for your wonderful compliments...imagery gets quite interesting the more you practice. Glad you liked this!! laryalee: thank you so much! I am glad you liked this!! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well kiddo........looks like your muse has found the path to imagery along with it's walk in love. Excellent write from you my friend and now I am looking forward to more "IMAGERY" filled works from you. Those are my favorite and now that you have given us such a superb piece to read we "EXPECT" it always. Now quit making faces and get to work. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, m'friend...you're right. I'm quite fortunate to have such a muse as I do...thank you for your kind reply, as you know I appreciate it, being I'm new at this imagery stuff....Expect it, huh? Well, then, I'll have to stop being and get a-movin', won't I? Thank you again, my dear friend.sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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