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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-02-01 05:15 PM


ATHENA




Goddess of Wisdom
strength belied in sword of light
known by poets all


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-01 05:22 PM


*love it Sunshine*

shine on with strength and wisdom

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2 posted 2001-02-01 05:38 PM


For Me?



Why, thank you, Ms. Sunshine!  

LOL....

(You know, it really DID make me feel special, too, when Ron named the new server after me! What a sweetie!


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3 posted 2001-02-01 05:47 PM


Karilea,
Lovely Haiku *L*

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4 posted 2001-02-01 06:09 PM


Lovely hon,
I want to name my daughter that if I ever have a daughter. I don't know what else to say, but this piece is simply beautiful.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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5 posted 2001-02-01 06:10 PM


Wisdom of Sunshine
grace and beauty of thy words
we grow in thou light



If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


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6 posted 2001-02-01 07:20 PM


Kari love

Karilea is pure
Sunshine is the only cure
This is Marsha's law

Fantastic love pure poetry, and it goes into my library with all the others that have made it over.
Thank you for this beauty dear heart
Take care as always love
                 Majestic Marsha
                          
I can do critiques, this is absolutely perfect. There you see that was a CA
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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7 posted 2001-02-01 07:37 PM


Yes...she is...and we're greatful to have her 'serving' us! :D
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8 posted 2001-02-01 07:43 PM


And I do believe most of us are having a royal good time getting to know our new digs! Ron, my hat is off to this lady, and to her Master!

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9 posted 2001-02-01 08:34 PM


Yes, indeed!! Very good, Karilea!!


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10 posted 2001-02-01 08:38 PM


The goddessess are taking over!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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11 posted 2001-02-01 11:38 PM



Yes, yes, a great haiku for our Athena!  

Take care,
Melissa


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12 posted 2001-02-02 01:08 AM


I read more than one haiku, they were all wonderful! Athena, what a powerful being. Thanks for the belivoquent haiku.

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

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