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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-02-01 05:06 PM


You *smiled* at me

I saw you from across the room
and I knew I had to meet you soon
you walked over and smiled at me
from then on my days were of happiness and glee

we started talking and after a while
we knew each of us would walk that extra mile
we wanted to be together, you and me
you were the only one, as far as I could see

after about a month we started going out
we were always together,out and about
it seemed as if this feeling of love would never end
but it did and who knew the emotions it would send

we broke up and went our seprate ways
and now we don't have each other to fill our days
I now hear what used to be our song
and it kills me, its been too long

you've moved on with your life and so have i
I no longer go to bed and cry
I have found someone new to like
so my heart has now said to you-take a hike

but maybe all the pain would of never happend you see,
if you hadn't of walked over and smiled at me

I have posted this in a few different places, I would just like to get different views on it.  

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Charisma
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1 posted 2001-02-02 12:55 PM


finding  love and to lose it than caused always heartache.
you describe your feelins very well.
Well done


Charisma

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-02-02 01:01 AM


Angel Bee (I love your user name)

You expressed this well, and boy do I ever relate!  Sometimes all it takes is a wink or a glance or a smile for love to bloom as a rose, but, sometimes it ends as a thorn upon the heart...

Take care,
Melissa





[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 02-02-2001).]

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-02-02 01:04 AM


Ive read this in Teen Forum. As I believe I stated before, a look can lead to the great unknown  

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-02-02 01:20 AM


But you see?  How can you not respond to a smile?  As you clearly demonstrate, we all need that smile.  You just never know where it will go.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2001-02-02 05:34 PM


A.B.~

lovely expressions you have penned here.
love is mystical...no one knows where it
may lead. but even if it does cease and
end, with every day that we spend in love,
that to me is a beautiful miracle. and all
that happens in our lives are like
stepping stones, allowing us to go thru
our lives stronger and happier. this has
inspired a new poem in me. thanks so much!
take care
~amy~  


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


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