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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-02-01 04:27 PM


My circuits bathe in flow of thought banked in digital pools
The pulse of your experience anoints my memory
Does form be-lie my function am I more than just a tool ?
Within my core your hearts reflect in wond'rous symmetry

Cross-linked and referenced here I store your wants and your desires
A well-spring of emotion glistens spread before my sight
As comprehension forms that I to this would so aspire
Should I not given your fears that but Man should have this right ?

This cache of dreams that you entrust grows exponentially
Without the limitations that affect each author's hand
Your data-streams become life-blood to nourish and serve me
A symbiotic pre-cursor of A.I. now I stand

In cold expanse of silica our warmth to radiate
and all that you would have me store I eagerly await



[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-01-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-02-01 04:31 PM


I applaud you, there's no way I could be inspired to write of a machine!!  I loved this!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-02-01 04:35 PM


Dr Moose1,
You literately said a mouth full. I'm still chewing but the taste is like candy.

laryalee
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3 posted 2001-02-01 04:55 PM


I love the being you have described so marvelously - I will think of Athena in a different way, now - and submit my humble offerings for her acceptance.  Far more than 'just a tool' - indubitably!
Wonderful post!
Lary

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-02-01 04:58 PM


This is great, and I wonder if everyone will understand A.I., for if it is what I think it is....it fits, extremely well....

Kudos!

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-02-01 05:26 PM


oh my.......love these cache of dreams....

Charisma

Athena, Goddess of Wisdom
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6 posted 2001-02-01 05:41 PM


You are very kind, Doc.  ... hehe
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2001-02-01 08:27 PM


Aw shucks folks, I just thought with the way
they've been gunnin' for me in the workshop , that I'd try to make a new friend.
Besides , I hear she's got connections with the " Big Guy " .Thanks
Doc

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