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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Tears Peers grow wisdom through their tears Through our fears and through their years They lubricant your taking hold Of being bold and growing old. A soother and an agitate A smoother and a pay for freight. The mad of sad and ploy of joy A bare and wear of our employ. It is a potion drawn from thee It is an ocean and the sea Of agony and ecstasy Of things that may or may not be. A compensate a lavaliere A pendent hung on chain of sheer. A cloths line drying in the sun Of all the wash the heart has done A tear, a drop of vintage wine That ripens in the hearts entwine. Glimmer and simmer of a goal The blood and essence of our soul. So savor every loin of tear It is the coin of human peer. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"A pendant hung on chain of sheer" what an image... thank you {~,^} |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is lovely Seymour...what images you paint We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Savor them??? *G* Hon, I don't have TIME to savor this waterfall! LOL Seriously... lovely poem, Seymour! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have drank many cups of this.... "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Wisdom expressed in such flowing rhythm - tears really do have amazing properties, and you've captured them wonderfully! Lary |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They lubricant your taking hold Of being bold and growing old. A soother and an agitate A smoother and a pay for freight. ====================== It is a potion drawn from thee It is an ocean and the sea Of agony and ecstasy Of things that may or may not be. A compensate a lavaliere A pendent hung on chain of sheer. A cloths line drying in the sun Of all the wash the heart has done A tear, a drop of vintage wine That ripens in the hearts entwine. Glimmer and simmer of a goal The blood and essence of our soul. So savor every loin of tear It is the coin of human peer. ======================== this poem needed to go on forever ... it will in my winkie heart... what an exceptional piece of poetry every verse is wisdom kissed ... my oh my Sweet Sy ... you touched infinite with this one ... did some flying too ... and got me sighin "A pendent hung on chain of sheer." "Of all the wash the heart has done" "A tear, a drop of vintage wine That ripens in the hearts entwine. Glimmer and simmer of a goal The blood and essence of our soul." me thinks thy tears are as sweet as raspberry tea  *winkiewinkie* me loves ya Stinky. If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the imagery.....thank you for sharing. excellent as always. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thanks for the nice comp. *L* Paula, Thank you Paula. Suthern, Waterfalls OH MY. Kathleen, Thanks for the read. Laryalee, Thanks for the read and comp. JM, Sweet answer from a wonderful poetess Winkiewinkie. Stinky Charisma, Thanks for the excellent |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Comment, Just a test I answered at 10:45p and wound up on page two with a 4:45p time? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
New test |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, This is a beauty, very much enjoyed it, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Thank you so much for the read and beautiful comment. Not used to the new system yet but I'm learning. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Sy, I'm so glad I saw this before it disappeared. It's a keeper for sure. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A wonderul play on words, Seymour, with wisdom woven through and through. Corinne |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's the "unbump" format that doesn't bring your reply to the top....but thank you for the "comp" thanks.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
kethry, I'm glad too. Corinne, Thank you for the sweet comp. Karilea, Thank you. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A compensate a lavaliere A pendent hung on chain of sheer. A cloths line drying in the sun Of all the wash the heart has done A tear, a drop of vintage wine That ripens in the hearts entwine. Glimmer and simmer of a goal The blood and essence of our soul. ========================================= this gets better like fine wine...but then your rhymes divine stand the test of time. *ww*  "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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