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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Moons wish fire from this moon tonight starts the fire of candle light placed just so with my direction draws within much connection burning roots of yester year brings new life as old disappears place this thought on moon's dish send it back with whisper's wish now take this wish, wing thy flight as I now stand between four white |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have pleased THE GODDESS... rofl...very very well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
who are these goddesses???? This is lovely "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fire from this moon tonight starts the fire of candle light placed just so with my direction draws within much connnection =========================== place this thought on moon's dish send it back with whisper's wish now take this wish, wing thy flight as I now stand between four white ===================== waaaaaay cooool... this is poetry in motion.. love the melodics of this imagery lovely candle dance and if me goddess twin is happy..then me is happy  way cool write If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
All these rituals. Sometimes women scare me lol Nice write tho.. Rich |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
1slick_lady, melodic and serene *sister moon is smiling* write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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