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Open Poetry #12

A New Beginning

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

0 posted 2001-02-01 01:56 PM

Here we are together
The skies begin to pour
Me, feeling lost in love
You, not so sure

We're lying close together
You invited me to talk
We shared our fears, and shed some tears
While lying in the dark

You reach to dry my tears
Your fingertips graze my skin
I search your eyes, you soul to see
If you might let me in

I see a distant twinkling
That wasn't there before
Anticipation runs through me
The door is now ajar

You reach for me, I reach for you
Now I'm alive again
Then suddenly you take my hand
And this is where we begin

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2001-02-01 02:03 PM

very nice, you set the scene, and you let us be there, very effective writing

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-02-01 02:06 PM

This is tender and moving......it's the twinkling that got tome!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

3 posted 2001-02-01 05:11 PM

Jellybeans - I lived it as I wrote it....Thank You.

Kathleen - Written with tender thoughts. Thanks for reading.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-02-03 05:36 PM

Enjoyed the thoughts Frankie..James

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