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kcsgrandma
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0 posted 2001-02-01 07:50 AM


Ice storm in my heart
It can never be spring here
Until you come back


© Copyright 2001 Marilyn Gordon - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-02-01 07:56 AM


KCS~
Now THAT would be sub-zero temps !

Poignant Senryu.
~*Marge*~


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laryalee
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2 posted 2001-02-01 03:05 PM


Hi KCS -
  This is a moment of loveliness! I like what you do!  (Your 'Perhaps' still lingers in my mind)
Thanks for your comments on Encircled!
Lary

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3 posted 2001-02-01 04:16 PM


Yes...lovely

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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4 posted 2001-02-01 05:37 PM


hope that he will come soon, to soothe the ice-storm and bring you warmth.

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-02-01 05:53 PM


kcsgrandma,
Excellent writing.

Denise
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6 posted 2001-02-01 08:38 PM


Very good, Marilyn!!
Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-02-01 11:46 PM



Oh, how I relate, well expressed!  May the ice on your heart melt with his touch upon Spring's dawn...

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



kcsgrandma
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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:07 AM


Marge - Yup!  It's pretty darn cold!   Thanks.

Lary - Thank you for your sweet words! Nice to have you here!  

Kathleen - Thank you.

Charisma - Thanks.  I'm afraid it really will be spring before he comes back.

Seymour - Thank you, kind sir!

Denise - Your kindness is always appreciated.

Melissa - Thank you for your lovely poetic wishes!  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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