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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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all that's dead be pulled from me... and light a fire, I might see. Take the twigs of yesterdays and make them food for other ways... A goddess I become this night I take the fire from moon's light and cast upon myself a spell that where I am? then, there Thee dwells. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like the lilting musical quality of this, serenity. Well done! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Every word.......absolutely every word.......hits my heart! This is SO wonderful! "A goddess I become this night I take the fire from moon's light" oh yes, I like this part best........but I like it all........  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A goddess I become this night I take the fire from moon's light and cast upon myself a spell that where I am? then, there Thee dwells. ===================== ummmmm I hate to tell ya this baby... but ya ALREADY were a goddess  and my oh my dont you look lovely doin yer candle dance ... and as for this jewel of a poem in your goddess crown.... like I keep telling ya lovie... THERE IS SOMETHING IN THE WATER THERE!!! POETRY BABY POETRY... MARDI GRAS STYLE AND CAJUN COOL!! *winkie winkie* wanna send me some LOLIf my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
COOOOOOOOOL helen |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful piece, serenity! Nathan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
want to thank you all...one from my heart... and gotta love the synchronicity helen! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes.......tonight as wishes blow through trees.......yours & mine flow with these....helen [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I would like to be a goddess also.....sigh "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love this..thank you for sending it to me.. :D :D |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Rites of Passage, Beautiful write Serene Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
for Kathleen? your wish this night is granted....(gawd I LOVE this...like a little wink, just for YOU...) and? according to my belief...the christed did not come to this earth to insist that THEY were divine, but? to prove that we all are... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
If I could write as you, Id be on top of the world. You really have a wonderful sense of wording things. Absolutely enchanting! -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree Serenity,...your writing is magical? like a spell or something. I don't know. It's so special. (Listen to me,...I can't say what I'm trying to say) You always manage to stop me dead in my tracks with your pieces. They stay in ya. (?) Sorry for the lack of ability to speak right now. *Peace you. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
FAR OUT, K/S. lyw, ol' mudbug . . . |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl you cast your spell with every word you write...love this |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
to my treasure box - for sure |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all good poet people! you make me smile and inspire me with your kindness! Love you all! |
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