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Seventeen Kisses.................
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Seventeen Kisses................. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He gave me seventeen kisses I only asked for one…………… He gave me seventeen kisses And I came completely undone He started at 7:17 And worked round the clock till 3 Giving those seventeen kisses To every inch of me……………………. Each one was given With patience and care I thought I'd die when he reached shoulders bare Seventeen kisses From here……………to there Seventeen kisses ~ everywhere ~ He gave me seventeen kisses ~ now it's my turn ~ I have seventeen kisses I need to return……………….. ~SEA~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
He can always count on you for a sweet return! I’ll send you a hug for this one  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is a man with some very lucky lips running around somewhere!!! This is great, SEA! I like your style....  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ I'll take that hug and send one right back to ya! Balladeer~ thank you sweet sweet man -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ *smiling here* BIG TIME ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is charming, and made me smile very big.  I think there are TWO lucky people involved there.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ like this???.....  Thank you KCSG~thank you, I think so too -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Nice Sea. Liked very much Rich |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I don't know where the # came from - but I surely LOVE this - most emphatically |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Ohh. Good to see you arent greedy.. in kissing and sharing your wonderful poetry. Thanks for the read. -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh baby... Im digging this lip smaking sweet treat... what a way cool poem Sea-gator ... mmm mmm mmm ... there goes that muse of yours inspiring magic in your pen again very nice me girlie girl If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...mmmmmm girl...I just like the whole idea of this...now if I could just find someone willing to let me kiss them seventeen times LOL |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whooohooooo ~Sea~.....what a write my friend, and if I was you, I would start counting over and over......I would lost the count between here and there..... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, seventeen kisses wow I can't believe you were counting while he was kissing. I'd have had other things to do with my mind like remembering my name. I think you should have a two for one sale. Then if you are still counting at the end of it...take two asprin and see me in the morning. Great write! One that is not demeaned at all by my trivia. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--I think seventeen must be your lucky number...for you have used it make a treasure. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is terrific! Get busy!!! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...what a time of year to be sharing kisses...and poetry like this one. Seems cupid has been playing around a bit ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh cool! Cuuute! Smile Sea. This was great. *Peace you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, he must feel so lucky to share such kisses with you right now! (kiss on cheek) This is sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write! |
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