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spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2001-01-31 09:11 PM

What if I said in a whisper?
Your lips I could taste
Soft scent of your perfume
The dreams it creates

What if I wanted to touch you?
But my hands cannot feel
Could my mind still imagine?
As if it were real

What if I pulled you against me?
With your breast pressed up tight
Could I remove all your anger?
Make you smile through the night

What if I woke up beside you?
Pulled your head to my heart
Would the day go un-noticed?
As we grasp for a start

"What if" is only a dream we can’t see
To change we must do it
Then we’ll see what can be
So what if I propose
We say maybe no longer
Reach out and take control
To make our hearts stronger.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-31-2001).]

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-01-31 09:14 PM

quote:
What if is only a dream we can’t see
To change we must do it

Liked this one a lot Spiked....very true words here.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-31 10:56 PM

enjoyed this, rich, but then I love those "what if" questions...passes the time for me yanno? Thanks for the read.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-02-01 12:40 PM

Rich~ I really like the what if questions here and where they could lead..........wonderfully done

-SEA

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2001-02-01 07:27 AM

Thank you Elizabeth and Serene
Sea it's one if those poems that could continue for ever.
Rich

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-01-2001).]

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-02-02 02:38 AM

Spiked,
Need I say I liked reading this poem...
Actually I came across it the other day and read it a couple of times and now here I am and feel it only just that I let ya know this poem 'rocks'....
~coco~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-02-02 03:18 AM

Rich...what ifs...boy do I have a lot of them...very well written thoughts I like this a lot

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

7 posted 2001-02-02 07:52 AM

my whole life is a what if

enjoyed the read

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-02-02 10:24 AM

enjoy the read

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

9 posted 2001-02-02 07:13 PM

Thank you so much Coco, Paula ,Doreen and Vandana. Pleases me to have my poems appreciated.
Rich

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