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Words That You Say
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Words That You Say |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“Words That You Say” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Words that you say, whispered in my ear, caress me with their tenderness, so very softly, as I hear… With sweetness they touch, all of my senses, and their loving innocence, leaves me breathless… I feel as if I’m in a dream, not quite awake, but every word from you, all of them I take… I not only hear them, they also enter my being, from my mind to my heart, with my eyes also seeing… And what I see, is not only the compassion of you, but your radiance and beauty, all the way through… So my love to you I express, comes from deep inside, I ask you to accept it, for never more will it hide… ~~~~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful words!!! So my love to you I express,comes from deep inside, I ask you to accept, for never more will it hide… No one could refuse to accept this. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, how lovely, how romantic! Yes, may words of love melt your heart and blossom true love forever, your lucky girl forever sharing your beautiful heart! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inot2B - Nice to see you, and I do thank you for coming by for a read. I appreciate the kind words about this writing. Mistletoe Angel - thank you, my friend, for the most gracious words about this writing. You are very kind Mistletoe Angel, and I wish you the best. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, this is so nice, so sweet, so achingly beautiful. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - A pleasure to see you, and a pleasure to read your most warming reply. Thank you Kethry, and I do apologize for not getting back to you sooner, but as always, I have been exceptionally busy. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Beautiful love poem coming from a tender heart. Nicely done - your poems are very special. Ariana |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
[This message has been edited by Ariana (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill, my dear friend... I know I've said it a million times, but I do so love to read the beautiful poems that seem to flow directly from your heart!! This one is music to my soul..... ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - thank you very much for your words, that come from your soft heart. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, Oh my.. this brought tears to my eyes. So beautifully written. You made me think of the one that I so dearly miss. Hugs of thanks to you for your amazing talent and touching my heart once again. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Bill, absolutely one of my alltimefav's of your's and I'm keeping this one... It's sooooooooooooooooooo beautiful I gotta say thank you PoetFriend for this most enjoyed read tonite... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is one of the most beautiful ways i've ever heard "i love you" expressed. this made me smile and think of the one i love. thank you ever so much for sharing this delightful piece with all of us! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ariana - thank you once again for your kindness with your reply. vandana - thank you for reading this and enjoying my writing. Sunny - A'hhhh, my dear one. Always a kind word for my writings, and I do thank you very much. May the best follow you, and always wear a smile. rosepetals25 - thank you from the bottom of my heart, for the heartfelt words that you have written to me about this writing. And yes, another that is very special to me. Thanks again. CocoBaci - My dear friend, I do thank you for your very gracious words about this writing. I appreciate it very much. Aimster - you are very welcome and I am very glad to share this writing with you. It is special to me, as I mentioned above. You are very kind with your words, and I am grateful. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
they also enter my being, from my mind to my heart, with my eyes also seeing… another sweet grouping of words...love it, Bill ~~Smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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