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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-01-31 07:03 PM


E vening shadows, ebony blu E
M oon flowers open in bloo M
E ntwining with vines of lov E
R ed lips, champagne and cavia R
A nd naked branches dance the samb A
L overs behind a bougainvillea wal L
D ancing to whispers of the win D

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  




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Krawdad
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1 posted 2001-01-31 07:37 PM


Oooohhh!  Super!  I love this, Virginia!
You can do these a lot faster than I can, and a lot better too.
Thanks,
K

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2 posted 2001-01-31 08:14 PM


Wonderful..a double too!!!  
Victoria
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3 posted 2001-01-31 11:11 PM


Thank you krawdad...and Poet Devine..it was fun writing..the first ever ha..

                    ~V~

                    


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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4 posted 2001-01-31 11:50 PM


Another one that shines like you
This is a jewel


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5 posted 2001-02-01 03:10 PM


this is beautiful........you did a great job.......helen
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6 posted 2001-02-01 04:30 PM


yes, a difficult form to master, nice job, Victoria

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Victoria
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7 posted 2001-02-01 09:02 PM


thank you insect..1slicklady and katheen...it was alot of fun writing HUGS
Glad you enjoyed..

                                           ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:31 AM



A double acrostic fabulously penned!  Whew - I know how difficult this can be, and you should be very proud of this!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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9 posted 2001-02-02 11:05 PM


I love acrostics ~V~  eventually I will try a double...huggz

~Wynter


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...Pope John Paul II



Victoria
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10 posted 2001-02-03 12:03 PM


Thank you melissa and Wynter...im looking forward to doing it again HUGS

                           ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



kcsgrandma
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11 posted 2001-02-03 09:27 AM


Wow, Victoria!  You made this look so easy, not at all forced.  My hat is off to you!  Very nicely done!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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12 posted 2001-02-03 10:44 AM


thank you kcsgrandma..glad you enjoyed..always nice hearing from you. HUGS

                               ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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