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Open Poetry #12

Waiting for my Sweetheart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-01-31 06:20 PM

Waiting for my Sweetheart

Waiting for my sweetheart
til she comes to me.
Minutes seem like hours
and hours seem an eternity.

Soon she will slide into my arms
and hold me close to her heart
til we make up for all
those hugs and kisses we missed
while we were far apart.

Magic moments will flow to show
how much we care.
Revealing feelings we have waited so
patiently to share.

Only heaven knows
how deep our love will grow.
Still this heart already knows
she is the angel
to which my love will flow.

Yu bogo shipayo.
I miss you.
Yu popo hajoyo.
I want to kiss you.

JamesLee@January31,2001
SweetYuKangho
Bogo shipayo.
Popo hajoyo.

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-31-2001).]

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-01-31 06:23 PM

That is just too sweet, James! I loved it.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-01-31 07:05 PM

James, when did you get better at this??? Wait a minute. . . you've always been this good. . .

excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-01-31 07:06 PM

She comes to me tonight...tonight, tonight won't be just any night..James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-02-01 03:09 AM

James~ I'm lovin this one

-SEA

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-02-01 03:18 AM

A brilliant piece of writing, James!

Nathan

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-02-02 07:01 AM

*wow* what a wonderful loving piece....excellent piece my friend.

love it.

((hugs))
Charisam

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-02-03 05:38 PM

Thank you Sea, Nate and Charisma for your wonderful responses...James

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