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Agent696_DS
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
NY, USA

0 posted 2001-01-31 03:29 PM

WHAT HAVE I DONE

Why did I hurt you so
What was I thinking
When I said I did not care
My heart has never known such despair
Why did I do the things I did
Why was it so hard to say
I love you
My Heart has never known such despair
What I want you to know is that
I care
What I want you to know is no matter what
I love you so
My Heart has never know such despair
Will I lose you
Will you care
I’m afraid to ask I do not dare
My Heart has never know such despair
What will it mean
To be apart
11 years together and
Now we are alone and apart
My heart has never know such despair
What mistakes I have made
I want to change
There is a way I hope and pray
To bring us together one day
My heart has never known such despair

Written By agent696_DS

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

1 posted 2001-01-31 03:36 PM

Welcome to Passions Agent696_DS

Great entrance with powerful words. Really nice piece of work!!!

Hope you enjoy your time here.

Cheers

CD

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2001-01-31 05:38 PM

Welcome,
This is great writing.
Keep em coming...

jsom

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-01-31 05:43 PM

I did the same thing before...I cared for someone yet I drove them away from me...hard to understand and a bitter pill to swallow if you are not given another chance to prove your love...to reveal the feelings within your heart...James

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

4 posted 2001-01-31 06:34 PM

Nice first post piece!

WELCOME

TO
PASSIONS

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-02-04 03:13 PM

Hi Agent696_DS

I echo James reply to this one, I wish you the very best, also I would like to welcome you to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay here. Great first post.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

6 posted 2001-02-04 03:47 PM

This poem touched me deeply. Loss is hard, always. My thoughts are with you. A much shared grief.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2001-02-04 04:01 PM

Welcome to the family! Please see your email for as special message.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2001-02-04 05:50 PM

Agent696_DS,

Wow... this poem is fitting my life so well right now. I'm sorry to see you going through what you are.. and I wish you the best of luck. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-02-04 05:54 PM

Welcome to Passions. Yes, words are hard to take back. Keep writing...and have peace.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

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