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Krawdad
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0 posted 2001-01-31 02:19 PM



PASSIONS

Passions is a virtual stoP
A choice among many forA
Screens the works of many poetS
Sonnets, free verse or senryuS
Including this acrostic bI
Of all the sites you might go tO
None other is such forum fuN
Satisfying poetic needS




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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-31 02:22 PM


Good job..i have written acrostics but never a double one like this.. ill have to try it sometime

               ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-01-31 02:32 PM


okay...okay...I have something too...but can't get it to line up...(I'm sort of anal retentive that way...) but will post soon...
good job e/k....

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2001-01-31 03:08 PM


Fantastic acrostic, K!

Nathan

Krawdad
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4 posted 2001-01-31 04:11 PM


Victoria, you should try one, but be prepared  for lots of false starts and thrown-away lines.  I put this one down many times for a rest and only the first two lines survived it all.

Serenity, I've been wwwaaaaaiiiiitttiiiinnnnggg for you!  Ever have that dream where you are walking into the classroom for the final but you forgot to go to any of the classes or do the assignments?  I'll see you there next time!

Nate, thanks for stopping and glad you liked it.

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2001-02-01 03:05 PM


greeeeeeeeeaaaaaat job !!!  sorry missed you the first go round but *bump*   helen
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-02-01 04:20 PM


very nicely done!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



VAS
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Oregon
7 posted 2001-02-01 07:56 PM


Good try on the challenge of a double.
Krawdad
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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:46 AM


Helen, Kathleen, Virginia
thanks for the compliments.  i kept waiting for someone else to do "passions" but had to do it myself.

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
9 posted 2001-02-02 06:26 AM


Very creative. I DOUBLE your sentiment.
Melton

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