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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
God touched the moon and felt it sigh, a silent heave, an ageless cry; a teardrop rolled across the sky and crystalized before it fell; a snowflake kissed a seedling shell imprisoned under winter's spell; when summer paused on zenith high, a flower opened prism'd eye; I touched its bloom - and felt it sigh. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WHOA! Who gave you this gift? Well done! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is so lovely! I really like the way you brought it full-circle from God's touch/moon's sigh to your touch/bloom's sigh. And you made it look easy, too, which I'm very sure it wasn't. Bump to the top for you. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"a snowflake kissed a seedling shell imprisoned under winter's spell;" this left me feeling hopeful and ready for Summer! Enjoyed this  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LaryALee~ How lovely ! I love the spirit circles that bring us back, to where we've been. Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
*sigh* so beautiful helen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH MY.. this is exquisite... what a stunning gem of a poem a jewel set in imagery and rhyme ... this is a sigh on high... and one of those poems that makes me say .. I wish I had wrote this wonderful writing!! If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your poetry is beautiful, I'll look forward to reading more! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
It is so nice to meet you all! Sunshine - I just love it when you pop in! Marilyn - thanks & a hug! SEA - I know you'll have a wonderful summer *g* Marge - yes, I do believe in the circles around us - and thanks for your welcome! Helen - a sigh says a lot - thank you! Janet Marie - I'm humbled by your complements - you make such magic with your words! Kathleen - thank you, sincerely! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You are my favorite new member and I just put you in my library so you just have to keep posting! I will keep reading! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great wonderful write.....excellent piece. Charisma |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep, smiling here, great poem, love your style, love your metaphors....you do have a wonderful gift, thank you for sharing |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you are a gifted writer.... this is perfect in form, meter, & flow... lovely theme and so very well constructed with imagery. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Love ya all! Songbird, I had to go searching for you (now I know how *g*) and will read some more of your wonderful words. Thank you for your heartwarming thoughts! Charisma - thanks so much - I'll be searching for more of yours, too. Hey jellybeans - back at you! Keep 'em coming! Doreen, I'm so glad I found this place and people like you...Thanks! CU later! Lary |
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