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liqwidnik
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0 posted 2001-01-31 12:04 PM


someone makes me smile
he makes me feel like no one else matters
except me
he makes me laugh
and tells me that I am beautiful
He is the one person in the entire world I would never pass up a chance with
he takes me out
he holds my hand
he kisses me in just the right way
he will always be there for me
he loves me
for these reasons I love him
and they are all true he is the love of my life someone I will never give up.
And I believe it's the things like this that is why people love one another in that special way.


Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you.

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Novak - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-01-31 07:35 PM


yes it is. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-02-01 03:04 AM


this is very sweet.......I liked this very much   -SEA
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-02-01 03:09 AM


I agree with everyone else...this is a wonderful piece!

Nathan

Ethan Halo
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4 posted 2001-02-01 03:23 AM


straight from the heart...pure emotion on paper.
wonderful sentiments.
you are lucky.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.

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