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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-31 03:16 AM





crystal liquid blue
snorkeling Hanauma Bay
live aquarium




pretty coral reef
the fish will eat from your hand
delightful pastime

marine parrot fish
darting in and out of caves
playing peek-a-boo

little puffin fish
blowing cheeks up very big
please don't come near me!

playful sea horses
bobbing along in currents
happy trails to you

jumping porpoises
laughing tourists get all wet
entertaining show





Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-01-31 05:00 AM


Did you see porpoises there...I need to make it that way again..
I have seen porpoises scuba diving out of Coco Marina...James

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2001-01-31 11:53 PM


This is out of my experience, but I enjoyed the images and think it is too lovely to sink out of sight, so BUMP!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
3 posted 2001-02-01 12:14 PM


LOL thanks for bumping it up ,Marilyn and James..yes I have on occasion at certain times of the year seen them near there.

I didn't have an eel gif. to put in here,but I have seen plenty of them too.LOL
and one shark one day...eeek
thanks for commenting on this fun senryu.
mahalo!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-02-01 12:22 PM


KoKo~   big smiles here......enjoy the imagery   -SEA
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5 posted 2001-02-02 06:21 PM


beautiful scene
very descriptive words
cool graphics too  
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Charisma
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6 posted 2001-02-02 06:40 PM


KoKo: why haven't I seen these one before.....where did you hide this beauty...oh my...I must be blind looking over these fabulous piece.....excellent my friend.

((hugs)))
Charisma

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2001-02-02 07:13 PM


KoKo......
Simply exquisite, and what I wouldn't do right now to be swimming in a warm island bay with the fish!!  I love reading your work, as it takes me to warm climates!!


~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~
it's later than you think!




Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2001-02-02 07:37 PM



Wonderful marine senryus - perfect graphics!  

Take care,
Melissa

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