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Hardkore
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since 2001-01-31
Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-01-31 01:19 AM


Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by love
Without my love I become passionless
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Glimpses of a future
Whose chances are almost never
Emotions never know nor shared
Only left with the chance
To fuel her passions towards others
Tormented to watch in the corner
Loving her may bring me to lose my heart
For it can't handle the loneliness much longer
Delisions of her felling the same
Curses me to hope and dream

I just want to wrap my arms around you
And escape to a better place
Lost in the love which is you
Show me the way
And together we will rise
Above the rubble of the past


© Copyright 2001 Garrett Megaw - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-01-31 01:22 AM


Welcome!   I liked this.......I hope to read more from you   -SEA
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2001-01-31 01:37 AM


HK,
A tender write of a heart that yearns....
I enjoyed the read and I thank you...
~coco~


1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2001-01-31 02:21 AM


this is so nice !!! I think you write very well........your words are like acid they burn....you have a new fan & welcome to passions...helen
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2001-01-31 02:59 AM


tender and passionate poetry. I enjoyed...welcome!!! aloha,Koko

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2001-02-04 02:11 PM


Hi Hardkore,

Wonderful reading here and welcome to passions I hope you enjoy our wonderful little home.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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