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Balladeer
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0 posted 2001-01-31 12:02 PM



His name was Father Valentine, a Roman Catholic priest,
Beheaded on the day before the Lupercalia feast,
An annual event in Rome held always on that date
Where men pulled maidens' names from jars and took them for their mate.

The feast was just a small excuse for wild debauchery
As drunken soldiers stripped the maids of their virginity....
A week-long orgiastic setting where all lust was fed -
The Roman agriculture god was used as figurehead.

The emporer decreed no military man be wed
For fear they would not fight but stay with family instead
But Valentine performed the vows in silent secrecy
And, for this act, he was condemned - accused of treachery.

While interred in that prison Valentine began to feel
Love for the jailer's daughter, who brought him the evening meal.
The day he died he wrote her notes and, under each last line,
He finished with these simple three words.."from your Valentine".

He was later given sainthood...became the symbol for the day
That's come to stand for love that we still celebrate today
So, every time you send a card, reflect before you sign
On that young priest who first used those words "from your Valentine".

© Copyright 2001 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-31 12:04 PM


Enjoy history...thank you for the research, and the sharing....

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Balladeer~ something to think about.......... -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-31 12:12 PM


very interesting.... i wondered who he was... i thought he mighta just been some guy hallmark made up...

but anyway, this is a wonderful write, michael.... very well thought out and executed... sounds like you did a little research...

i particularly liked this line...
"A week-long orgiastic setting where all lust was fed -" hehe... what fun!
(do any research on that one? LOL *wink*)

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4 posted 2001-01-31 12:20 PM


Sunshine...yes, I love history, too...and discovery. Thank you....

SEA....yeah...that it's easy to lose your head on Valentine's Day!!  

Doreen...No, no research on that one. I'm too young   Glad you enjoyed  

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5 posted 2001-01-31 12:21 PM


Enjoyed this very much, thanks for doing it.
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6 posted 2001-01-31 01:00 AM


While interred in that prison Valentine began to feel
Love for the jailer's daughter, who brought him the evening meal.
The day he died he wrote her notes and, under each last line,
He finished with these simple three words.."from your Valentine".

He was later given sainthood...became the symbol for the day
That's come to stand for love that we still celebrate today
So, every time you send a card, reflect before you sign
On that young priest who first used those words "from your Valentine".

=====================
its always the daughters that gets them in trouble LOL ...
she must have brought him spam, huh?  
(sorry it was just too easy)  
very cool write poet sir...
looking forward to the next installment of wisdom
jm


If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


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7 posted 2001-01-31 01:12 AM


Deer one
very illuminating write and you said you couldn't.  
You Have such style and grace, in your write and on your face.
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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8 posted 2001-01-31 01:17 AM


Balladeer,
I enjoyed reading this and I thank you for sharing the history of sweet Valentine with us...

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9 posted 2001-01-31 01:25 AM


Balladeer, I just came across this story a couple of days ago, with all the basic points you have included, but you have told it with so much more grace and style!  I enjoyed your version very much.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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10 posted 2001-01-31 06:09 AM


it's wonderful, my favorite day of the year!

Kathleen



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11 posted 2001-01-31 07:02 AM


Thanks for the history lesson. I was not aware of the details. But your version in rhyme made it very interesting.
Melton

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12 posted 2001-01-31 07:28 AM


'Deer love, this is wonderful, I've always loved history, and this did a brilliant job of bringing it alive. I often think that if only had the chance to do history the way everyone else learnt it I'd know so much more. (We only did women's history, very strange school we girls attended)

This however makes up for my patchy history lessons, and it is a wonderful piece from you as well. So where's part two? Don't tell me I have to wait! Good grief love, I haven't got all day!!   (I'm sorry I couldn't resist either, I can resist anything except temptation!)
Utterly wonderful written with your usual flair and it is absolutely fabulous.  
Thank you for this, now bring on the rest  
Take care love as always
              Mushy
                  
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Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-31-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-01-31 08:45 AM


Wonderfully written Michael ... such a smooth flow, bringing with it the wisdom and history of the ages. I've read the stories, and you've brought this beautifully to poetic form ... loved this ... you're the master of words sweet poet!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-31-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-01-31 09:40 AM


I had never ever heard the story of Valentine, thank you for sharing the story and enriching it with your gift of writing  
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15 posted 2001-01-31 02:32 PM


krawdad...and I thank you for reading  

JanetMarie...yep, always the daughters....and he was a priest!!  

Kethry...thank you...but there's no grace to the face right now...maybe some day  

Coco Baci...I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you  

Grandma...I'm glad you liked my version  

Rose...why does that not surprise me?   Thank you!!  

Melton...thank you. History is filled with very interesting things to be explored. Glad you enjoyed it ....

mushy...make you wait? NEVER! twill be forthcoming...thank you for attending class  

Kit....once again your kindness makes me weak..what a wonderful supporter of my pathetic efforts you are...thank you !!!  

jellybeans...most people haven't...I'm pleased you liked it. Thank you for the kind words  



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16 posted 2001-01-31 03:29 PM


Glad to know these history....and the meaning  behind Valentine.....thank you for sharing

((hugs))
Charisma

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17 posted 2001-01-31 03:39 PM


I swore that I would not be seen
Reading Valentine's poems and turning green
With envy at someone else's sappy delight
When my own heart hurts. It didn't seem right.
But I saw this poem by Balladeer
And opened it up ... though my heart feared
Hearts and flowers, I found instead
A bit of history to be read.
Valentine's day is more than a card
It's a time to remember that love is hard
But worth everything we have to give
With all of our hearts, as long as we live.

Wonderful poem, Balladeer... and ROFL @ JM and the spam... could even a priest resist? *G*

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18 posted 2001-01-31 09:00 PM


Yep, I thought Hallmark made up the name...well, I still find that after all these years, I still learn something new everyday.....not usually in such an entertaining way, though! Fabulous poem, Sir Balladeer! Say, who was the big mouth that gave away his secret ceremonies? *tsk, tsk* Terrible behavior, I'd say.

Denise

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19 posted 2001-01-31 09:54 PM


Oh yes, you have written of this lovely holiday's history so very well! I remember that he was going to be put to death, but many admired him and told him that he was their valentine, and so he has become such an admiration throughout history. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing, I'll be sure to read Part II!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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20 posted 2001-01-31 10:50 PM


Thank you very much, deer, for this wonderfully done and informative piece of history...I found it very interesting.
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21 posted 2001-02-01 12:20 PM


Thank you deer   this is indeed a very interesting piece of history.

going now to Part 2

Maree  

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22 posted 2001-02-02 12:27 PM


Wonderful, Balladeer, to get to have a history lesson and read a great poem all at the same time!  Now I am going to "read the rest of the story". Love this one!
      Hugs, ME

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