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Nature Of Whispers |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Do you hear my love I am the night that surrounds you with my cape of soft blackness The winds that blow over and through you with gentleness The moonlight that gives you light, the stars that reflect your eyes The sun that brightens your day, the streams that flow through the heart of you The fire that burns the passion within you, the white flame that drives your heated nights, the blue flame that makes your body sweat I am the stillness deep within your soul, the nature of your world each whisper of your heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
.......and for me, that would be the ocean........this is beautiful  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The fire that burns the passion within you, the white flame that drives your heated nights, the blue flame that makes your body sweat I am the stillness deep within your soul, the nature of your world each whisper of your heart =================== whew..thats quite a whisper  very very nice GE... very cool too love the flow and feel of this well done jm If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ What lovely whispers ! 'I am the stillness deep within your soul, the nature of your world each whisper of your heart' Absolutely lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I am the stillness deep within your soul, the nature of your world each whisper ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Simply beautiful! Deb |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what is said in those whispers. . . lasts for a lifetime. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you for all the kind responses....I really appreciate all....I still have been under the weather, so right now my time on line has been limited....be well all.... Greeneyes~  "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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