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Brianna
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since 2001-01-30
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0 posted 2001-01-30 06:57 PM


My Dear Connor,

How we miss you my heart,
How we long to be held again,
How lonely my nights are,
We cannot wait to see you again.

Aiden is such a bonny boy,
He grows more like you each day,
Both in temperament and looks,
He is wonderful in every way.

My father is doing as well as can be expected,
Yet I fear his time is nigh,
I need to be here to nurse my Da,
Yet when alone, I think of you and sigh.

Connor, my love, my husband,
Know you are never far from my thoughts,
And in only a breath or two,
I'll be back in your arms as I ought.

Look up at the moon,
So beautiful when full and blue,
She is the ever shining beacon to remind us,
I am always there with you.

Though we cannot touch,
Nay, not a single caress,
I long for the moment when again,
Your love eases my fear and unrest.

With you life is a song,
Like the ditty's I sing to you,
And I swear it won't be long my heart,
Until we return to you.

Oceans of Love,
Brianna



© Copyright 2001 Brianna - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2001-01-30 07:08 PM


Brianna,
This is very beautifully written and so sad. Keep happy and all will be well. Welcome to Passions.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-30 07:09 PM


This is wonderful. . . a perfect answer. . . and now it's my turn isn't it??

The story continues. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-01-30 07:30 PM


Thanks Daniel J D but it's merely Isis here writing under the pen name of Brianna, thought it would be cute for Sven's and my Brianna/Connor epics.. but thanks for the welcome anyway  
Sven glad you liked it  
Isis/Brianna

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2001-01-31 12:52 PM


Brianna,
you have the spirit of a Goddess, and the write of a dreamer.

Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-31 11:01 AM


Welcome!   You speak my language, this is wonderful, hope to hear more from you!!!

Kathleen



Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2001-02-04 02:18 PM


Hi Brianna,

Hummm, Isis my friend I like the tone of this, sad yet an awaiting the thrill of union of two in love, I really enjoyed and loved seeing you writing in this manor.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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