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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is posted for a certain someone who has given me some powerful inspiration lately...  two souls...undoubtedly one; time and distance...mountains of separation. your spellbinding heartbeats...my relentless memory; tears and reverie...don’t wake me... hazel windows behind protective clouds...the stillness of crashing waves; thoughts of if only...musings of what should be. brilliantly opaque sky...galaxies of exuberance; transparent reflections...you know what i’m thinking... the warmth of your embrace...the security of hands entwined; locked in your gaze...i’m forever captive. complementing ocean breezes...emphasis on our burning hearts; lost in this fiery moment...don’t leave me standing here... drums rolling in the distance...the atmosphere closing in on us; discoveries by the minute...ruthless restrictions of time. your breaching words...my willing resolve; intimacy of two spirits...i just cannot be...without you. < !signature--> Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
An inspirational flow ...thank you for sharing it! Lary |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The poem, beautiful! Certainly about a mortal relationship. Yet the photo, I have to tell you, made me want the s on someone to be upper case. That Someone is from Whom this inspiration most surely should have come. Lovely, snowpants. I almost looks like a cross, don't you think? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hazel windows behind protective clouds...the stillness of crashing waves; thoughts of if only...musings of what should be. brilliantly opaque sky...galaxies of exuberance; transparent reflections...you know what i’m thinking... =============== very cool SP ... but then Im a bit biased to (...)  lolpoetically wonderful use of imagery and comparisons to express your emotions in this piece of anticipation and longing. well done poetess take care jm If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
laryalee: thanks! it's my pleasure to share! glad you liked it!  VAS: yes, you are right...a mortal relationship...but definitely heaven sent...thanks for reading! JM: well, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this, and I thought you might be biased... I'm also enjoying the imagery thing more and more everyday...sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
snowpants, This is very special and definitely motivational. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ beautiful as always. this really tugged at my heart. you have a remarkable way of expressing your heart thru your writing. hope to talk to you soon. amy  ~~~~~~~~ ô¿ô "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ beautiful as always. this really tugged at my heart. you have a remarkable way of expressing your heart thru your writing. hope to talk to you soon. amy ~~~~~~~~ ô¿ô "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Snowpants, Absolutely lovely.... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So so beautiful....... -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Daniel: thank you for your kind comments! Nice to see you! Aims: hey, girlie! thank you, my dear friend, for your reply! I am so glad you liked it! -e ~~~~ Coco: thanks! glad you enjoyed! SEA: well, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
stupendous!!! Kathleen |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Why thank you, Kathleen... stupendous, eh? I appreciate your reply! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's so great, I wanted to bump you!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris~ i must have been drunk the first time i read this  ...for i surely didn't give it the credit it deserves. this is superbly written with your soft touch and grace. your loving heart shines through so incredibly in this sweet friend. the fragile hope and trust of it all is simply breathtaking. one of my favorite of yours, but it is such a hard choice to make...the last line says it all. take care sweets. ttyl...Amy ~~~~~~~~  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kathleen: why thank you so very much! it is an honor! I am glad you like this so much!  Aims: oh, Aims, Aims, Aims...all I have to say is, it's da beer!!  Loves ya, girlie!!sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my! This is beautiful, both in words and imagery. Love it. Deb  |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Deb: thank you! I appreciate your kind reply!! Denise: thanks! I'm glad you could stop by! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I don't see how anyone could leave you behind when you pour your heart into it and show them what you have to offer. Very beautiful write my friend and accompanied by a wonderful graphic. As I have said earlier, your poetry is growing alot and I am diggin' the end results much. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Why, thank you, my dear friend...your comments mean a lot to me. I truly appreciate your encouragement, being you're the expert at imagery that you are. Glad you could stop by, m'friend! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Doing a lot of catching up lately! And look what I come across. A beautiful, swirling poem, full of power and complex images. Great stuff, snowpants. Wow! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Trew: why thank you! It's great to see you around here again! I am glad you liked it! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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