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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-30 02:36 PM

A Wynter's Mourn (Sonnet)

Awaken to the sound of rain
Each movement made of sighing pain.
Each thought erupts, perhaps to view
Wondering when, the whys of two.

A young girl dreams in future daze.

She grasps at straws, gets shortened end.
The prize, not hers, at rainbow's bend.
Like rivers flow, the tears begin,
Captured, webbed, in silkened spin.

Grown up now, she waits in daze.

The widow, laced, in heart of black.
For waiting still, a love in lack.
Forever, never comes her days.
She mourns the rain, in misted haze.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-01-30 08:41 PM

wonderful Wynter. . . just wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-30 09:36 PM

your wonderfuls made me sigh

thank you Sven {{huggss}}

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-02-04 02:39 PM

Hi Wynter,

Mourn not my sweet, a beautiful young lady as yourself shall have a future to be envied, I loved this you are a gifted writer.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-02-04 03:01 PM

Wynter,
perfectly captured imagery in this poem, beautiful!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2001-02-05 12:32 PM

I can't think of anything to say but beautiful, and that seems so trite for a poem as articulately written as this one. Very nice, Wynter, worth reading and re-reading.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-05 08:34 AM

I read the first line and I was hooked...I love rain. I haven't tried a sonnet but once, and I can't seem to master it! Loved this one!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2001-02-05 09:15 AM

Beautiful poem Wynter

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-02-06 10:28 AM

Cerenity...well I could hug you for those words ~S~ {{hugzz}}

Kethry- thank you for enjoying my words and visiting all the time

Marilyn that was so nice to say "worth reading and re-reading."

thank you very much

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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