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Open Poetry #12

Then Cries the Night

laryalee
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since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2001-01-30 02:32 PM

A day devoid
of useful bent -
no thought construed,
no solace lent -
is wafted on a pallid mist
where even echoes don't exist.
Its hollow corpse
dissolves in flight;
the morning mocks,
then cries the night.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-01-30 02:34 PM

really big WOW in this one i love it yuh

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-01-30 02:36 PM

damn! another newcomer with a familiar style... ohmeohmy... geesh... anyway, it's a style i LOVE and i say welcome to you and can't wait to read more of you....

succinct, vivid, alive, & real...
this poetry has great appeal

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-01-30 03:20 PM

wow.....so much said so poetically perfect
very cool read
impact of succinct imagery and emotion
well done

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

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