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return again (duet with Masked Intruder)
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return again (duet with Masked Intruder) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A living heaven, an immortal moment-- a practiced caress A simple silence in the dawn, moment of the sun's sweet bless glint within a lover's eyes, the smell of snow laden pine The perfection of a misty valley in the eerie candescence of a full moon... in the hush before the dawn- that glimmer in the morning's still I take my hand, brush lips upon, and know that I will love you--Will An early awakening captures beauty of her sleeping face A promise whispered in her delicate ear A loving caress on her rose-petaled cheek And a forever wish to remain here... And his breath? Shivers her ear Every being of his being--here Every cell alive again Whisper love, I'll live and then I'll take the moonbeam From the sky And capture stardust In your eyes I will be your answer "why" Oh take me to return again... *thank you to the Sweet Philip* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
And thank you sweet Serenity, this is a lovely poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in the hush before the dawn- that glimmer in the morning's still I take my hand, brush lips upon, and know that I will love you--Will An early awakening captures beauty of her sleeping face A promise whispered in her delicate ear A loving caress on her rose-petaled cheek And a forever wish to remain here... And his breath? Shivers her ear Every being of his being--here Every cell alive again Whisper love, I'll live and then I'll take the moonbeam From the sky And capture stardust In your eyes I will be your answer "why" Oh take me to return again... ================= oh my...my my my ... mmm mmm mmm ... this is divine ... you two MUST do MORE of this ... tis written in the poetic stars me thinks. very coooool If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh ME oh MI geez, you guys, MI serene? or what? good grief! this is awesome! and it's formatted so well, too! *g hey, MI, glad to see you out of that tree but watch out for security personnel... they may kick you off the grounds for writing so well.. and serenity, your writing is like music from a harp....  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, this is lovely....you two did a fabulous job!  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Captivating Serene. Rich |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent by both of you. . . wow serenity. . . you're just writing with everyone! I love it. . . they should be a book. . . "serene duets". . . you know? like the album by Elton John??  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all...especially Phil---my comrade of insomnia...and? I guess, MI is M.I.A. again...but I do appreciate the lovely comments from all...(doreen? "like a harp?" hmmmm...references, references, chuckling here) THANKS TO ALL WITH HUGS TO FORUM. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Not MIA, possibly POW, pehaps both. *grins* Wonderful job piecing it together, K; it turned out beautifully. DP, y'nut, haven't you noticed that when I wear my mask, the security (or basically everybody) can't see me? *grins* Thanks to everyone else for the comments. S'ren...schedule's bouncing left and right, so never in at the right times. I'll try to catch you later. -me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely duo.....you two! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these wonderful duet........excellent piece. Charisma |
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