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Missy
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0 posted 2001-01-30 07:24 AM


Forever in love
Forever in my thoughts
Forever in my dreams
Forever in your arms
Forever hand in hand
Forever gazing into your eyes
Forever our hearts beat as one
Forever sharing our lives
Forever good nights
Forever good mornings
Forever happiness
Forever laughter and joy
Second by second
Minute by minute
Hour by hour
Day by day
Week by week
Month by month
Years to come
You and me…
Together Forever!
I Promise…
Without a doubt!
I love you…
I will forever!!!



[This message has been edited by Missy (edited 01-30-2001).]

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bslicker
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1 posted 2001-01-30 08:55 AM


Missy,

This is great.... such commitment stated


vandana
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2 posted 2001-01-30 10:53 AM


enjoy the read
Gemini
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3 posted 2001-01-30 02:10 PM


Missy, Very sweet poem, I liked.
laryalee
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4 posted 2001-01-30 02:23 PM


This virtually dances with hope and joy!
Lovely!
Lary

Missy
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5 posted 2001-01-31 07:46 AM


justsomeofme, vandana, Gemini, Lary,

Thank you all very much for your comments, I know he just loved it!!!

Missy

kcsgrandma
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6 posted 2001-02-01 12:01 PM


This was sweet, and I certainly enjoyed the sentiments, but even more I like your reply.     That's what it's all about.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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7 posted 2001-02-02 06:17 PM


he must be one special person.  the poem shows it pretty obviously

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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