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I Dream....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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I dream of music Wild beats of my heart Rhythm and tempo Sexy ~ smart I dream of romance Shadows dancing in soft light Slowly ~ gently Just out of sight I dream of passion A storm raging at sea Bottled up emotions Finally set free I dream of magic Things mystical ~ unreal Memories from my soul Seeing all that I feel I dream of you Sadly ~ in vain And quietly say good-bye With each drop of rain ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know whether to say...keep dreaming, for another ending... or wake up...to a new beginning.... I'll have to think on it.... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
maybe it could be both?  |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, SEA!! I enjoyed this!! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you ... welcome back snowbunny  way cool poem me Sea girlie... softly sensual and sweet in its longing with a touch of the blues me likes ...  If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
Sea - I love the emotion I felt when I read this....nice job. Tammy |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is Super…Lois! Love it |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise~ makes me happy that you enjoyed!!  Janet~ Thanks.......it's so hard to be without power for regular stuff, but to not be able to come "Home" was killing me! thanks.....that touch of blues was just for you! Tammy~ glad you could feel it  Insect~ thanks Jimmy!! ~ SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you...I loved the range of emotion here...very apt and true to the spirit! Nice, nice work SEA! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Nice Dream Sea. Rich |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
uummmmmmmmmmm...........why stop dreaming at all. What a beautiful write of sadness. A lot of sentiments in this one and very very emotional. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful poem, awfully blue ending. ;o{ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A beautiful poem with the saddest ending I've read in a very long time |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
dreams....they can be mix with happiness and sadness....excellent penned my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sea, dreams seem so real at times, but we all do need our dreams, oddly enough some dreams we don't remember until that surprise or memory happens. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done sea..enjoyed very emotional piece~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, SEA! *S* Well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Another SEA-story well done. Say welcome back .... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ As a gentle rain falls outside this night- I'm touched with your thoughts. Lovely, dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ thank you so much Rich~ thanks Mark~ nice to see you stopping in......thank you for reading VAS~ yes, thank you WY~ I hope that's a good thing? Thank you Charisma~ thank you Vandana~ glad you liked Rosebud~ yep, kinda like a de'ja'vu Victoria~ I'm glad you enjoyed Suthern~ thank you Interloper~ thank you "Welcome Back" Marge~ so sweet of you......love that Florida rain.....*sigh*....... -SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great expressions of your sadness, Sea...a well-written piece indeed! Nathan |
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