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Impending Morning
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Impending Morning |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It is morning, But the sun hasn’t come up yet-- I’ve still got time to decide What this day will hold. I can resign myself To mending this broken heart With which you’ve left me, Comforting this disappointed spirit Which has been me lately. Or, I can decide to keep walking-- Leave you behind completely Before you have taken yet another day. Over the horizon Peek the most breathtaking hues, Indicating the break of day-- I haven’t much more time. I’ve been fighting you off For much too long-- It is finally time to stop allowing you Each and every hour of my day. These clouds should belong to me; These stars should be shared With someone who holds them As dearly as I. Relief seems so far away, But the time is approaching For the sun to find its way Above that water line. Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Snowpants! Lovely! Denise |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
snowpants~ this tugged my heart strings....peace and hugs...  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SP..I like your attitude in this...time for a new day to dawn ... well written and expressed... great use of imagery comparisons to show the emotions... great write!! jm If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This....I like.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can smell the sunrise coming in this one to brighten your day. What a powerful write my friend. Don't let someone slow you down if they are not really into it. Only slow down to enjoy the moments with those that truely appreciate the time with you. Loved it. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Denise: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Greeneyes: thanks! Glad you could stop by!  JM: I must thank you very much...imagery is something I've been desperately trying to work on these days. Your compliment means a lot. Glad you liked it! Sunshine: thanks! glad you liked! Mark: well put, m'friend...and yes, the days of wasting my time with someone not 'into it' are over...thanks to some outstanding friends in my life. Glad you liked this one! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice piece snowpants Enjoyed the read TOP THE Click! TO |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
thanks, insect, for the BUMP! glad you liked this!! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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