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Sven
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0 posted 2001-01-29 08:53 PM


*A Connor and Brianna Poem*

Brianna. . .

I miss you terribly my heart
and I shall always miss you when you're not around. . .

Miss your smile, your voice. . .
the way that words just come from
your heart. . .
          your soul. . .

The hole in my heart needs to be filled by you,
by your words and by your love. . .
please come to me soon,
          if only in dreams. . .
and I shall be all the more in love with you. . .
          for you are my only heart, my only kindred. . .

Ah, but ours is a love ne'er to be fulfilled my heart. . .
but fate is kind and strange,
and mayhap one day we shall meet again,  
and on that day
I will hold you close to my heart
          and to my body and never let you go. . .

but until that day,
I shall always hold your life and your heart in my heart. . .
safe from the cares of the world and from the storms of life. . .
I will shield you from the arrows
          that would steal your life from this plane
                    and caress your spirit with the balm of care from my soul.

This I promise to you my heart. . .
for you shall always be with me. . .
even now, until the end of time. . .
and I will always be yours. . .
          on this plane. . .
                    and on the next. . .

All my love. . . always,

Connor

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.




[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 01-29-2001).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2001-01-29 09:11 PM


Sven dear heart, that is the ultimate piece I swear that is such a wonder that I am dumbstruck. Oh I truly am totally speechless.
Truly awesome.
On the understanding that less is more

STUNNING

Take care love
Bubbles





Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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2 posted 2001-01-29 10:10 PM


This is lovely, Sven!!

Denise

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Sven~  Oh
Wow my friend, if beauty ever existed it's within these words.....it is indeed
within these words......






Greeneyes~



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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-01-29 10:40 PM


Ah, the Knight of Night of Write....

is back....

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5 posted 2001-01-29 10:42 PM


~I'm holding my heart. This is,...um,...YES it's beautiful! Really WoW. *Peace.
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6 posted 2001-01-29 10:52 PM


A jewel this is PoetFriend...


Sven
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7 posted 2001-01-30 01:16 PM


Marsha love, I do believe that your bias is now showing as well. . .  

Denise, thank you. . .

Greeneyes, you have humbled me with your words. . . thank you. . .

Sunshine, he never really left. . .  

Spitfire, thank you my friend. . .

PoetFriend Coco, thank you for reading  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Martie
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8 posted 2001-01-30 01:33 PM


Sven--This is beautifully written!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-01-30 02:10 PM


Sven may love always be within your reach...James
doreen peri
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10 posted 2001-01-30 03:49 PM


awwww....geez....you're such a romantic... hope you send this loveletter/poem to her... it sounds so very sincere....words any woman would want to hear... well done, sven!  
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11 posted 2001-01-30 06:00 PM


Connor and Brianna's love spans across time and space and will bloom always!     Thanks for this Sven another beauty to add to our saga!!  My turn now stay tuned....
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Sven
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12 posted 2001-01-30 07:17 PM


For those that don't know. . . Connor and Brianna are two characters created by Isis and myself. . . they are a Lord and Lady in early Ireland. . . we've shown parts of them here and in Dark. . . and right now, we're just exploring some of their earlier times. . . we post parts of their story from time to time. . . hope that you enjoy. . .

Martie, thank you my friend. . .

James, I wish the same for you as well. . . always. . .  

doreen, I've always been a Romantic. . . it's just a part of me. . . thank you. . .  

Isis, indeed their story is one for the ages. . . thank you for helping me tell it my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kethry
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13 posted 2001-01-31 12:55 PM


Sven,
love of ages weft for me, how lovely.
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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