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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-01-29 07:55 PM

tears wait just behind
paranoia, self-doubt, pain
I sit, waiting, Why?

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-29 08:01 PM

Been there myself...but it does feel wonderful when you finally stop sitting and get out there and make some noise. Go get 'em. Try it.....you might be surprised. Wonderful Senyru

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-01-29 08:03 PM

Isn't it amazing how we scratch the surface, yet see so little...

Well done Virginia!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-01-29 08:21 PM

Heh-heh, this one came when someone on another forum had a subject heading of Senyru and inside was only asking for the rules to it. Another person, and I , were disappointed that there wasn't a senyru inside. So in fun, I polished one off in about a minute. This is what resulted. There's probably some psychological significance to it, but no fair analyzing me. ;o}

Glad you liked the piece, anyway.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-01-29 09:55 PM

A wonderful, sad write!

Nathan

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-01-30 01:17 AM

Thank you, Nate Dog. I wasn't even sad when I wrote it, but I think I can still relate to what it says. Sort of allude to that in the post above yours.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-01-30 05:12 PM

oh yeah.....I can relate on this one too...wonderful penned.

((hugs))
Charisma

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2001-01-30 10:37 PM

VAS,
never let pain stop you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-01-31 09:44 AM

Thanks Charisma for reading and commenting. You, too Daniel. And Daniel, read the 4th message above to see what brought about this piece, but still you've given good advice. ;o}

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-02-01 02:51 AM

Enjoyed the senyru and the story of the inspiration, funny how that works sometimes

-SEA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-02-01 08:02 PM

Thanks, SEA, for reading and the kind comment.

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