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CD
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0 posted 2001-01-29 07:28 PM


The One Kindred Spirit

Looking at you I see the stars
Not knowing what it is that I feel.
My glances turn to gazes
As I admire your beauty unsurpassed.

Who are you, O Lovely One
And why are you crossing my path of fate?
What goodness did my Maker see in me
That he should bring you along into my life?

You do not realize what you are doing
Slowly fitting your consciousness into mine.
All the while you draw me to your presence
Your thoughts link mine.

My love for you is not defined as eros
It is something beyond that.
It is the merging of affections so great
A mere one word can not describe it - should not.

I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze
And your image moves not from my mind.
I realize but one thing of these feelings
You are my One Kindred Spirit.


© Copyright 2001 CD - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-29 07:39 PM


Yeppers........there is no explaining the power of a soul-mate.  Wonderful read.  WELCOME TO PASSIONS and I look forward to reading more from you.
VAS
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2 posted 2001-01-29 07:40 PM


Some really nice sentiments here.  Welcome!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-29 07:52 PM


Kindred Spirits....one of my favorite lines...brings to mind...oh, many people, many places, many times...

Welcome to Passions!  Please check your e-mail for a special message!  And.....
ENJOY


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Irie
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Washington State
4 posted 2001-01-29 07:55 PM


CD, I enjoyed your view on what seems to be a very deep
love for one special person!  
You've made a wonderful entrance with this piece.
Well Done  

Welcome to Passions......


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



CD
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5 posted 2001-01-29 08:05 PM


Wow!!

Thanks a lot peoples.  That was indeed a warm welcome   Thanks a lot for the Greeting Card Sunshine - loved it!!  The rest of you, once again thanks a lot.  Means a lot.  Just a small piece of info: I wrote that for all those people out there who KNOW that their love is more than love.

Thanks
CD

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-01-29 08:09 PM


'Who are you, O Lovely One
And why are you crossing my path of fate?
What goodness did my Maker see in me
That he should bring you along into my life?

You do not realize what you are doing
Slowly fitting your consciousness into mine.
All the while you draw me to your presence
Your thoughts link mine.'

Beautiful first post, CD!!  Welcome to Passions!

sp  


Never leave me, never go...
I need you here, I need to know...
You will always be
Close to me

spiked
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7 posted 2001-01-29 08:11 PM


"I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze
And your image moves not from my mind.
I realize but one thing of these feelings
You are my One Kindred Spirit."

Wonderful Start and welcome
Rich

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with you
8 posted 2001-01-29 10:39 PM


CD~ Welcome!   Such a beautiful start.......I hope to read more from you   -SEA
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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2001-01-29 11:05 PM


CD~  Awaiting more of your words, this is just beautiful....   Welcome...   




Greeneyes~



***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Janet Marie
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10 posted 2001-01-29 11:08 PM


My love for you is not defined as eros
It is something beyond that.
It is the merging of affections so great
A mere one word can not describe it - should not.

I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze
And your image moves not from my mind.
I realize but one thing of these feelings
You are my One Kindred Spirit.
====================

very cool write ...
Please add my Welcome to the list ..its so nice to meet you CD.
you make a great poetic first impression with this well written piece
I look forward to reading more of your writing.
take care
Jm

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


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11 posted 2001-01-30 12:12 PM


CD~
Please accept a hearty welcome to Passions.

I enjoyed the kindred spirit of oneness embodied
in your poetic thoughts.

You will find much to enjoy here.
WELCOME  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


CD
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Posts 101

12 posted 2001-01-30 11:20 AM


Thanks a lot you guys.  It was a great thing to be accepted in such a warm way.  Appreciate your replies.

I hope too to read all your poems as well - definitely look forward to it!!

Cheers,
CD

Rosebud1229
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13 posted 2001-01-30 12:44 PM


loved this CD, I look forward to more, welcome.
Paula Finn
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missouri
14 posted 2001-01-30 10:22 PM


CD...welcome to our world...this is lovely
Cerenity
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Escondido-California
15 posted 2001-02-04 02:28 PM


Hi CD,

So enjoyed this poetry of yours, wonderful first post and welcome to passions I will be looking forward to more of your work.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Charisma
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lost in blue pages
16 posted 2001-02-04 03:32 PM


Welcome to passions....and I love your entrance.....wonderful expressed
will look forward to read more from you

Charisma

Celeste
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Posts 597

17 posted 2001-02-04 03:35 PM


Oh wow!!!!!!   Leaves one with a soft sigh of longing.  Just lovely.

To capture and live a moment is truly living


dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
18 posted 2001-02-23 09:55 AM


gotta love destiny!!
this is a wonderful write CD

hugs, g


PERFECTION has no CHARACTER...
-unknown

Irish Rose
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Posts 10263

19 posted 2001-02-23 11:33 AM


Ok, where is the book store with your poetry in it?
Welcome to Passions! Long may you write!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
20 posted 2001-02-23 06:27 PM


~Kewl Beanz~
Welecome.
A great poem! I can't wait to read more!


~*Peachy Be*~

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21 posted 2001-02-23 06:41 PM


Well, I don't know what to say. I think that everyone has said it all. I guess that I can throw in wonderful piece again and tell you how moving it is. Soul Mate pieces always make me feel warm inside. If someone can write that about the one they love maybe someday someone will write like that about me.

PPPPPPPUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRFECT!!!

Welcome to our home,
take your shoes off
stay awhile!!!

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


CD
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Posts 101

22 posted 2001-02-23 08:03 PM


Wow!!

Thanks a lot you guys - you have no idea how much it means to have my poetry appreciated so much.

Forgive me for my absence lately in the forums - school has started again and you all must know how that is...

ONce again thanks a lot all of you.

CD

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23 posted 2001-02-26 04:47 PM


What a wonderful entrance you've made... this is beautiful! Welcome!
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